Don’t mind…
Don’t mind the things I say
Or those stupid things I do
Just remember in forgotten days
My heart will always belong to you
Don’t mind the words you read
Or the hard lines I write
It’s true sometimes it’s killing me slowly
But it keeps me warm throughout the night
Don’t mind if I’m not happy
As sometime a single tear falls
Just keep in mind that I always be with you
No one can’t stop me, not even those high walls
But do mind even if we speak
That my feelings are honest and true
There is just no one that I would rather be with right now
Just one single person… Being with you !!!
FakedxDoll: | Donderdag, mei 19, 2005 09:44 |
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*~ Mzz MpL ~*: | Donderdag, februari 13, 2003 00:22 |
Your poem contains a few mistakes, but besides them it's really lovely.. Hope you don't mind me naming them up.. sometime ~ sometimes I always be with you ~ I am always with you OR I'll always be with you No one can't stop me ~ No one can stop me speak ~ talk (otherwise it sounds like an one-man-show!) But as I said above, it's beautiful.. :) xXx MpL |
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Auteur: The Slayer | ||
Gecontroleerd door: Firebolt | ||
Gepubliceerd op: 12 februari 2003 | ||
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