Well, Right.. Ahm. This is a kind of stupid But hey!! It had to get out ^_^
The stupid things in p!nk is what I always say and do and stuff, and the things wrote in Black are the things I really feel and mean…
Ahm……. Jes It’s weird. I hope you’ll get it ;o)
I need you
Leave me alone
I can’t survive
Go and stay gone
I’m playing
Machine of pain
I’m shooting
Myself again
I’m crying
No I feel fine
Scratching my face
No, it’s not mine
I’ve lost them
Out of my hand
One goodbye
Never knew where they went
Aching heart
No, it’s ok to leave
Burning tears
A fast wipe with my sleeve
I’m dying
Rip me open beauty of knife
I’ll suffocate
In this lonely life
I’m so far down
Smiling to the sun
It’s so dark in here
The sparks hold my fun
Freaky scars
I lay down to his feet
A broken smile comes forward
As I bend and break in this leaving creed
My door is closed
Sure I’ll let you in
Please let the lights on
I like to feel darkness on my skin
Please don’t try to see me
I’ll show If time has come….
But for now, It just hurts
To play with my mask
*En een onwijs mega super grote sorry, voor de mensen die hier heel vaak mee te maken hebben en die ik dus ook vaak pijn doe... Daan doeit t niet express…..
=( echtuh niet!!
*glote knufattack op alle mensen die dit lezen ^__^*
Liefs,
Lost_Angel: | Woensdag, juli 07, 2004 14:05 |
This is sooo NOT stupid..it's wonderful!! But you have to let go of your mask..it's holding you back from all happiness you could want, so let it go! I know all too well it's really hard to do that because you're scared and everything, but think about it this way: You don't show your mask in your poems, right?Well..and a lot of people here only know you through your poems, like me. But they all like you! So maybe, just maybe..you're not so bad without your stupid masky after all..give a |
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The unreachable: | Woensdag, juli 07, 2004 11:44 |
Wauw..heel originele stijl hier in dit gedicht! Echt leuk bedacht! Hoe kom je toch steeds op die fantastische ideeën?? Veel sterkte toegewenst aan een talentvol Elfjah..Take Care | |
Tim Mooij: | Dinsdag, juli 06, 2004 21:56 |
nice one, as usual great idea this style, very original, like it, try to say all the black stuff, you'll see it converts into pink someday :) grt T |
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Butterfly: | Dinsdag, juli 06, 2004 21:34 |
*stilte* and again a wonderfull poem stertke LIefs |
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strawberryswirl: | Dinsdag, juli 06, 2004 20:57 |
*woow* en da was ver alles wa k ierover kon zegge...*blown away* kuzz: Leila |
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ThE/CuRe?: | Dinsdag, juli 06, 2004 20:33 |
Wauw.. heel mooi!!! wel, ik kan niks beter verzinnen dan de vorigen om te reageren.. en zoals life~in~every~breath~ al zei, je hebt niks te verliezen.. tkan alleen beter met je gaan door open te staan voor de mense die je willen helpen..sterkte, je kan het! xxx ThE/CuRe? |
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life~in~every~breath~: | Dinsdag, juli 06, 2004 19:49 |
ik vind zeker niet dat dit gedicht suckt ik vind em mooi vooral omdat het je gevoelens goed reflecteert zoals al je gedichten trouwens é ma bedoel ik vind em echt mooi and i think maybe it's time to take of you're mask and show them how you really feel they'll still accept you and try to help i'm sure of that het lijkt wrs moeilijk enzo maar mss moet je het probere het enige wat je eventueel kan verlieze (maar dat denk ik niet want hoewel ik je niet ken denk ik dat je geweldig, tof, lie |
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Fading Away: | Dinsdag, juli 06, 2004 19:45 |
I'm feeling a little bit confused now.. You wrote here my thoughts down, so tell me, how do you know? Ehm, ja, erg herkenbaar dus.. It's hard. For them, but also for you. Don't feel guilty all the time, they'll forgive you, when you can forgive yourself, like Reality said.. Sterkte, Liefs, |
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~Reality~: | Dinsdag, juli 06, 2004 19:40 |
Don’t worry, they know you don’t do it on purpose. At least I do ^_^ But I guess that’s not your main thing right =S People will forgive you, if you forgive yourself.. And btw I really don’t think this peom sucks. You wrote it and it are Your feelings put together in a wonderfull piece of art =) *Glote tack terug lekker puh* |
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Auteur: FrogCess | ||
Gecontroleerd door: michris | ||
Gepubliceerd op: 06 juli 2004 | ||
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