*left-right*
did i break one of your parts,
or trampled your heart perhaps?
did you get sick of my false starts,
or that i made your world collapse?
i know that with my duct-taped wings,
i won't catch you up, flying
yes,irritating, all my slow-motion things
but yet i see the use in trying
my words are lethal, with their speed
lethargic are my thoughts
a silencer is what i need
he knows what he oughts
i don't wanna be the topic of this conversation
i wanna focus more on you
because i never gave you a single occasion
to tell me what's the best to do
i am doting on you my dear
your will shall come true
tell me how to be, and i will hear,
i will change, if it were for you
i'll stop being a down-and-outer
i'll try to be more up-and-in
i'll be a little less of a shouter
and live as if speaking's a sin
anyways sorry for what i was and would be
it won't be like that for too long
i hope you want to go left with me,
my right way's always wrong...
or trampled your heart perhaps?
did you get sick of my false starts,
or that i made your world collapse?
i know that with my duct-taped wings,
i won't catch you up, flying
yes,irritating, all my slow-motion things
but yet i see the use in trying
my words are lethal, with their speed
lethargic are my thoughts
a silencer is what i need
he knows what he oughts
i don't wanna be the topic of this conversation
i wanna focus more on you
because i never gave you a single occasion
to tell me what's the best to do
i am doting on you my dear
your will shall come true
tell me how to be, and i will hear,
i will change, if it were for you
i'll stop being a down-and-outer
i'll try to be more up-and-in
i'll be a little less of a shouter
and live as if speaking's a sin
anyways sorry for what i was and would be
it won't be like that for too long
i hope you want to go left with me,
my right way's always wrong...
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Wicked Soul: | Vrijdag, september 17, 2004 18:17 |
| EUHHHHHHHH..... GREAT!!!!! How do you do this?! Tell me! ;) Damn, you're such a fantastic writer. I love your style! And just like Unreachy said: speaking's not a sin. En wat die sublieme laatste zin betreft: what if people like you the way you are? Maybe you don't need to change. You're a wonderful girl. Veel liefs, -Lien.- |
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| de nifter: | Dinsdag, september 14, 2004 08:20 |
| nou, mij irriteer je absoluut niet. ik kan dit erg waarderen | |
| The unreachable: | Maandag, september 13, 2004 20:48 |
| Speaking isn't a sin, my dear strawberry..Just be yourself..Nicely done | |
| stairway 2 heaven: | Maandag, september 13, 2004 20:45 |
| I love the last sentence! xxx mooi gedicht ze |
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