Lost Words
Lost Words
I had so much to say,
But i couldn't speak..
Reflections of words,
Became oh so week...
You wont see me cry,
'coz I smile instead...
So many dying words,
So much unsaid...
Undiscribable pain,
Emotional wrack...
Can't reach for the skies,
My heaven's dead...
Blinded by your memories,
And all the blood i shed...
Gone are the days,
When the sun used to set...
Every where I look,
I see you instead...
Living the dark life,
Alone in my bed...
Pictures of you,
Visualised in my head...
You had all my heart,
Since the day we met...
Do you even care?
Or not one regret !?
BS. Kake
I had so much to say,
But i couldn't speak..
Reflections of words,
Became oh so week...
You wont see me cry,
'coz I smile instead...
So many dying words,
So much unsaid...
Undiscribable pain,
Emotional wrack...
Can't reach for the skies,
My heaven's dead...
Blinded by your memories,
And all the blood i shed...
Gone are the days,
When the sun used to set...
Every where I look,
I see you instead...
Living the dark life,
Alone in my bed...
Pictures of you,
Visualised in my head...
You had all my heart,
Since the day we met...
Do you even care?
Or not one regret !?
BS. Kake
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Unseen: | Woensdag, september 17, 2008 09:40 |
| Heel erg mooi geschreven:) I''d like to see more.. Gr. Unseen |
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| Mrs Flintstone: | Vrijdag, februari 29, 2008 14:34 |
| Beautifully written. Only one comment. Refrain from using ''coz or ''cause ("slang language")in a poem. Rather use "because" or "for". In this case you could even leave it out alltogether: "You won''t see me cry; I smile instead" Good work! Regards, Wilma |
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| Odypody: | Vrijdag, februari 29, 2008 14:25 |
| Mooi heel mooi gr.Ody | |
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| Auteur: kake | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: christina | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 29 februari 2008 | ||
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