I tried
I tried, and tried and tried
until trying stopped making sense
Till I got tired of trying
and tried to stop trying.
Things didn't get any better
in fact they only got worse
but that didn't seem to matter
for I was already cursed
with the will to keep going
trying, till I'd die
but that day never came
so I kept living a lie
believing, that all would be alright
but I got swallowed into despair
like I thought I might
and so I tried, and tried
and then I died
Maybe it wasn't worth it
maybe you can't even see
and maybe for you it's senseless
but it made sense to me
Don't say I shouldn't have bothered
don't tell me it's all lies
'cause whether or not I succeeded
Don't dare to say I didn't try
-- why do all good things come to an end?
until trying stopped making sense
Till I got tired of trying
and tried to stop trying.
Things didn't get any better
in fact they only got worse
but that didn't seem to matter
for I was already cursed
with the will to keep going
trying, till I'd die
but that day never came
so I kept living a lie
believing, that all would be alright
but I got swallowed into despair
like I thought I might
and so I tried, and tried
and then I died
Maybe it wasn't worth it
maybe you can't even see
and maybe for you it's senseless
but it made sense to me
Don't say I shouldn't have bothered
don't tell me it's all lies
'cause whether or not I succeeded
Don't dare to say I didn't try
-- why do all good things come to an end?
Reacties op dit gedicht
| P.S. de Winter: | Zondag, augustus 08, 2010 21:28 |
| f wat denk je zelf...? het gaat er niet om wat ik denk, maar wat jij wil met dichten.. |
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| P.S. de Winter: | Zondag, augustus 08, 2010 21:26 |
| f hee bedankt voor je reactie maar niet al je verbeteringen kloppen, sommige dingen zijn zo bedoeld. En t is geen spellingswedstrijd maar een gedicht he;) thanks anyway! Je zal het zelf wel het beste weten dan, ik neem je serieus..jij jezelf ook? |
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| P.S. de Winter: | Zondag, augustus 08, 2010 21:17 |
| to [say] to me I didn''t try | |
| P.S. de Winter: | Zondag, augustus 08, 2010 21:16 |
| a bit rubbish start, (bit to much trying) but some nice sentences in this one, your spelling isn''t quite right, but I do understand what you''re trying to say.. ['']Till, living [in] a lie, [dispair], I [finally] died, it [makes?] sense to me, to sat [to me] I didn''t try..(leuke slotoverdenking btw..) goed gedicht/good poem! |
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| Auteur: Flurrrs | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: pantarhei | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 08 augustus 2010 | ||
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