you could better be a gay
did you ever thougt
that he liked you?
that he exctually loved you?
i don't think it girl
You where just
in your fantasy world
he dumped you,
as hard as it could be
you don't even saw it
you don''t even knew
i laf, i laf very hard
because you are so stupid
to believe in his lie's
you could better be a gay
because you're not ment to be for guys!
that he liked you?
that he exctually loved you?
i don't think it girl
You where just
in your fantasy world
he dumped you,
as hard as it could be
you don't even saw it
you don''t even knew
i laf, i laf very hard
because you are so stupid
to believe in his lie's
you could better be a gay
because you're not ment to be for guys!
Reacties op dit gedicht
| The Wizard Of Lightning: | Vrijdag, januari 10, 2003 12:02 |
| i laf? je bedoelt: I laugh ? De i is altijd een hoofdletter in het engels. als je over de ik vorm spreekt be a gay bestaat niet. be gay wel. to be for guys! to be for the guys! klinkt logischer. het begin volg ik je nog. het meisje dat niet door heeft dat ze gedumpt is, de reden dat jij haar uitlacht is niet duidelijk. en het einde is niet passend. jammer, |
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| Auteur: jezzica | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: klitty | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 09 oktober 2002 | ||
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