No promise
Somehow, somewhere you feel me
You feel me burning inside
Why I'm still there I don't know
Maybe 'coz you loved me when I laughed screamed and cried
It's that your love is invinceble
It's that I need you most of time
It's that your breathing gives me life, and
Only your care for me makes me feel fine
You've never really promised eternity
You told me your love with that lovely smile
You couldn't hurt me and so not yourself
Maybe it's over, I keep up smiling for a while
Still one look into your pretty eyes
They show everything I can know about you
That you fear, your pain and that smile
That you love me, miss me but there's nothing you can do
It's that my love is unstoppeble
It's that I lose you all the time
It's that my breathing takes your life
And there's nothing that makes you feel fine
{Voor Mickey}
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Albrecht Paul: | Maandag, november 18, 2002 13:45 |
| Dit is een heel mooi liefdeslied, Chichi. Let wel op 'invincible', met een I dus. En 'unstoppeble' lijkt me ook niet te kloppen. Kijk dat eens na. 'Unstoppable' zou ik zeggen. Maar eigenlijk is het een lelijk woord. Zeg daar 'cannot be stopped' of: 'everlasting' Zet er een goeie muziek onder en ZING het, Chichi! |
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| Worteltje: | Woensdag, november 13, 2002 09:55 |
| oohhh... deze is zo mooi..:*) Wish you a smile.. Take Care Worteltje |
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| Auteur: Chichi | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: DiAngeli | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 10 november 2002 | ||
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