my Love
It was the way you always knew me
And when I could reach you every day
It was the way how you could always see
When there was something I couldn’t say
How you always made me feel save
How you always made me feel save
When the times were a bit less
How I always felt this little wave
Of true and extreme happiness
You were always my shining sun
You were always my shining sun
You always cleared my days
By the time that ‘us’ begun
I already loved you in so many ways
But as time passed by, you turned away
But as time passed by, you turned away
And left me with all these doubts
You just left me here to stay
Only hearing my own shouts
Left alone on this cold earth
Left alone on this cold earth
With the tears I’m trying to hide
I guess I just wasn’t worth
To take place there by your side
I was just to naïve to notice
I was just to naïve to notice
That your love for me was gone
I guess it wasn’t good like this
I guess that’s why we’re done
And all the things you made me feel
And all the things you made me feel
You know what I’m talking about
When I found out this love wasn’t real
You know the reason why I shout
And in my heart all this pain
And in my heart all this pain
Life becomes to hard to live
The thought of you driving me insane
There isn’t anymore love to give
Cause why you left me, I have no clue
Cause why you left me, I have no clue
And why you’re with her, no idea
Just remember, my love remains true
Please, Just remember….little me
*~~Black Sun~~*
*~~Black Sun~~*
dit gedicht heb ik al eerder opgestuurd, maar dan als 'song' vorm...daar heb ik echter geen reacties op gekregen daarom stuur ik hem nu in als gewoon gedicht..zonder de refreinen e.d
Reacties op dit gedicht
| xANGIEx: | Woensdag, augustus 13, 2003 17:54 |
| prachtgedicht... vink echt supermooi... | |
| geranne: | Dinsdag, november 19, 2002 09:58 |
| nou meissie, van mij als nog een keer een reactie hoor! vind ze allbei prachtig! kus kus! Love u, XXXzjes Geranne |
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| *~ Mzz MpL ~*: | Donderdag, november 14, 2002 18:58 |
| Heeeyz Black Sun, Once again a beautiful poem.. Sad, but lovely.. Keep up the good work..!!! Remember: Not receiving any responses doesn't mean anything.. Most of the peolpe just don't know what to say.. :) LieFs, xXx MpL |
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| Nielsje: | Dinsdag, november 12, 2002 16:21 |
| Black sun, het is echt een prachtig gedicht. Ik ben zeker dat je nog veel reacties gaat krijgen. Blijf je gedichten zo maken!!! knuffies |
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| Auteur: black sun | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Firebolt | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 11 november 2002 | ||
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