Broken Mind
u break my mind
your love no where to find
help, i've been told
sit alone in the dark, where i mold
my soul rotten inside out
friends will turn away ..no doubt
this world, not for me
take me to a place where i can be free
why can't i be like the rest
i feel something dripping down my chest
i've gone to far
this time it leaves a scar
do i dare take this life
an endless story with no drive
something to keep moving
i'm the thing you're not approving
daunted i fade away
with no proud words to say....
your love no where to find
help, i've been told
sit alone in the dark, where i mold
my soul rotten inside out
friends will turn away ..no doubt
this world, not for me
take me to a place where i can be free
why can't i be like the rest
i feel something dripping down my chest
i've gone to far
this time it leaves a scar
do i dare take this life
an endless story with no drive
something to keep moving
i'm the thing you're not approving
daunted i fade away
with no proud words to say....
Reacties op dit gedicht
| The unreachable: | Zondag, juli 20, 2003 19:21 |
| Echt heel mooi geschreven! Elk woord is goe gekozen, mooie gevoelsbeschrijving,... echt waar, congrats!! Keep up the good work! |
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| xANGIEx: | Maandag, maart 24, 2003 19:03 |
| mooi geschreven erg gevoelig ook wel je moet niet zoals de rest zijn... iedereen is 'anders' en vrienden komen & gaan maar sommigen zullen altijd in je hartje blijven net zoals jij in het hartje van anderen zal blijven take care kus |
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| Auteur: final say | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: maneschijn | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 21 maart 2003 | ||
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