...you should have been alive again
took a breeze and held on
to a skinny rope that trembled
as it ran through my fingers...
took a shivering sorrow
and lead it out to your tomb
to find your being at ease
rest forever played
into worldly hearts
as they find themselves
in your whispered music...
Reacties op dit gedicht
| The unreachable: | Dinsdag, september 16, 2003 21:35 |
| W-O-W!!!! *even stil* really, it's "breath-taking"!! It's so beautiful! I'm stunned!! Elk woord is zo goed gekozen, zoals "a shivering sorrow" Nice!!This is great!! I love it!! Keep this up! You are really good!! ;-) |
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| Chichi: | Maandag, september 15, 2003 22:24 |
| heel erg mooi... *stilte* |
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| Auteur: diepdenker | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Sheena | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 15 september 2003 | ||
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