shitburger
she had
a certain
a specific
kind of
air
around her
she had
pain
whenever she
turned
around her
there were
thoughts
around her
rumours
she
was not
a sad
a sad
being
she had
a certain
feel
about her
and
or
but
she had
pain
whenever she
turned her eyes
into
her mind
was open
for
not
a
thing
close
it
down
into the depts
of deepest darkest shropshire
*0°0+$+0°0*§*0°0+$+0°0*
she loved a man
the man loved his dick
they tried to live together
but after three weeks
the dick threw her out
a certain
a specific
kind of
air
around her
she had
pain
whenever she
turned
around her
there were
thoughts
around her
rumours
she
was not
a sad
a sad
being
she had
a certain
feel
about her
and
or
but
she had
pain
whenever she
turned her eyes
into
her mind
was open
for
not
a
thing
close
it
down
into the depts
of deepest darkest shropshire
*0°0+$+0°0*§*0°0+$+0°0*
she loved a man
the man loved his dick
they tried to live together
but after three weeks
the dick threw her out
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Zasan: | Dinsdag, april 20, 2004 22:01 |
| Lef, denk ik. Zo zit het in mijn hoofd. Ik denk 'lef' en zou niet weten waarom. Lef gewoon. |
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| Zasan: | Maandag, november 10, 2003 18:15 |
| Weet je, eerst las ik de reacties en spontaan begon ik te grinniken. En het thema 'GELUK!'. Maar grump, mijn Engels is te slecht om dit volledig te begrijpen, zodus..een beetje duiding graag. |
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| Leen Struelens: | Woensdag, oktober 15, 2003 16:47 |
| Zaliiiiiiig! Heel leuk om lezen!!!! :-) | |
| Oorlam: | Woensdag, oktober 15, 2003 16:30 |
| haha ik moest even moeite doen om het te lezen (kleurcombinatie?) maar las het met veel genoegen! | |
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| Auteur: nego | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: christina | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 15 oktober 2003 | ||
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