There is a tree standing
There is a tree standing,
In the middle of the park,
Where you can see darling,
Two names in only one hart.
Sometimes I sit dreaming,
By the shadow of that tree,
A little bit thinking,
Where those jong lovers may be?
While no one is fulling
the empty place in my hart
Sinds your love
is leaving this place
for an other park
My lonely lips are blue
Because they sauch for you
And they found no one else
I always been missing
That wonderfull feeling
Sinds the day you are gong
Who kiss me as you do
Beleave me it is throug
Just You and no one else
I never been kissing
Other lips whit feeling
And now I am on my own
In the middle of the park,
Where you can see darling,
Two names in only one hart.
Sometimes I sit dreaming,
By the shadow of that tree,
A little bit thinking,
Where those jong lovers may be?
While no one is fulling
the empty place in my hart
Sinds your love
is leaving this place
for an other park
My lonely lips are blue
Because they sauch for you
And they found no one else
I always been missing
That wonderfull feeling
Sinds the day you are gong
Who kiss me as you do
Beleave me it is throug
Just You and no one else
I never been kissing
Other lips whit feeling
And now I am on my own
Reacties op dit gedicht
| ikkuh: | Donderdag, januari 08, 2004 17:55 |
| oke, je vraagt om opbouwende kritiek ~_0... #) probeer wat meer op je engels te letten :) grammatica etc. en verder heb ik helemaal niks erop aan te merken, behalve dan dat t heel mooi geschreven is ^_^ dank je liefs,jorinde |
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| Auteur: Vermeersch Jean-Paul | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: christina | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 08 januari 2004 | ||
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