My incomplete hate
I hate him
I hate him for what he did
I hate him for his act
His act of uncontrolled feelings
An act of egoism that took over
An act of selfish thoughts
An act controlled by his disgusting thoughts
Thoughts that pushed him over the edge
That took over his mind
Not thinking of consequences
Not thinking of thoughts of a little girl
Not thinking of trauma’s caused by him
His act of feelings that took over
Brought me to a life of insensibility
But he’s responsible for the person I am now
Therefore I can’t hate him completely
I hate him
I hate him for his act
I hate him for he’s responsible
I hate him for my incomplete hate
Reacties op dit gedicht
| wiEzel: | Woensdag, juni 23, 2004 17:42 |
| incomplete hate...mooi | |
| Samantha...!: | Zaterdag, april 17, 2004 17:23 |
| Jeej Nikki... mooi gedichie hoor.. maar meissie.. vertel mij es.. wie haat je dan zo erg?? JE BENT TOCH NIET JALOERS HUH??.. dat hij degene is die mij kan begrijpen en troosten.. (je weet wel.. gedicht hulen) Nou ja.. als je nog steun wilt.. je wet het he.. je kunt bij mij aankloppen.. =) xusjus Sam.. |
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| ***Bengeltjuh***: | Maandag, april 05, 2004 10:20 |
| hey lieve nikki kijk eens aan heel mooi neergezet en verwoord dan mag je zoiemand ook wel haten ze maken het er zelf naar liefs en kussie gerjan |
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| Dark Sinner : | Zondag, april 04, 2004 16:09 |
| Wauwie........ Super mooi geschreven!! xus |
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| Gecontroleerd door: Sheena | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 04 april 2004 | ||
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