Searching
A restless mind
Is taking over
For lost memories to find
In overtaken sorrow
A fight in the head
A searching mind
The tears are sad
For answers to find
The crying heart
With a broken mind
It felt apart
For things that will never find
A hurting soul
Fighting against the dark
A heart with a hole
Memories leave there mark
A dying tear
For what is gone
A crying fear
For what have to come
Is taking over
For lost memories to find
In overtaken sorrow
A fight in the head
A searching mind
The tears are sad
For answers to find
The crying heart
With a broken mind
It felt apart
For things that will never find
A hurting soul
Fighting against the dark
A heart with a hole
Memories leave there mark
A dying tear
For what is gone
A crying fear
For what have to come
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Zowi: | Zondag, april 18, 2004 15:34 |
| Try to accept that past than you won't heve to be afraid of the future.... Don't get me wrong I'm not saying you have to like the past.. just accept it has happend there's nothing you can change about it, just reckon it was there and thing i don't care about that anymore that's the past let's make a future Liefs, |
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| dropje: | Dinsdag, april 13, 2004 20:52 |
| Mooi maar probeer die angst kwijt te raku | |
| Lost_Angel: | Dinsdag, april 13, 2004 17:42 |
| Mooi..! Maar probeer die angst voor de toekomst los te laten, dan zal die zoveel mooier zijn! Liefs, |
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| promise*: | Dinsdag, april 13, 2004 16:24 |
Mooi geschreven... :) xxx |
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| BloodElf: | Dinsdag, april 13, 2004 14:32 |
| let that crying tears for what has to come be a tear of joy!! | |
| gothicangel: | Maandag, april 12, 2004 22:16 |
| jij kunt er anders ook wat van hoor nice poem sad yes but very lovely |
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| ~Reality~: | Maandag, april 12, 2004 20:11 |
| Like it!! Echt ubergeweldig geschreven But don't give up the fight. You will conquer it! Hold on, Liefs, FrozenSilence |
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| The unreachable: | Maandag, april 12, 2004 17:23 |
| I like it, Darky! ;) | |
| PoetMir: | Maandag, april 12, 2004 14:04 |
| Ik vind dat de titel wel past! =) Heel erg mooi gedaan! *Kusje* Mir |
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| Precious Things: | Maandag, april 12, 2004 13:17 |
| Ik vind dat het goed is voor het gedicht. Ik doe ook soms geheimzinnig en moeilijk met de titels. Jouw gedicht is mooi en de titel is perfect ;) | |
| Dark Sinner : | Maandag, april 12, 2004 12:51 |
| De titel klopt niet echt, maar ach je mot toch wat??!! | |
Over dit gedicht
| Auteur: DarkSinner | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Sheena | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 12 april 2004 | ||
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