Lost Child
The night show me
What my thoughst are
The day kills me
In my crying heart
Everytime I walk
I hear a wispher of a child
Every time I talk
I can hear her cry
But everytime I turn around
To look where she is
I start to taste blood in my mouth
But no matte how far I look
She isnt there
But one day
At my school
I saw a little face
I wasnt that moment very cool
Closer and closer
I walk to her
More and more
I scared her
Then I stading near her
My friends doesnt get it
I say: Over there..That little girl
They look, say they seen nothing and turn away
I point to the girl
And she start to cry
I tell my friends: "he wheres a pearl
And she crys!"
My friends started to look around
And say "I see nothing
I dont see a girl around
And either I dont hear a cry as a sound"
The girl still standing there
All alone and afraid
Trying to make something clear
For A moment I turn my face a way
But when I look again
She is still standing there
Try to tell me something
I try to understand and ignore my fear
Her face turns to white
Her mouth start to bleed
There comes a man at her side
I could hear her weep
The man takes the girl by her hand
The girl didnt want to come
He opens a gate..
It looks like I could see the sun
The girl staying wisphering,
To soft I couldnt hear
She started to screaming
Finally I could hear her voice
Behind her cry.
She tells me:"I am dark and lost"
She said:"Get me out of here
I cry every night and pray to the gods"
"I ask them for forgiveness,
But they dont accept
I am livind in my world of hopelessness
What did I do wrong"
The man next to her
Took her by her neck
Leaded her to a fire burn
Where she can rest
That night in my dream
She came to me again
Crying for her father
Crying for her Sisters dead
When I wake up
My friends ask me what was going on
I wanted to tell them
But I knew it was wrong
I ask them: Do believe in magic of only in realety?
Or do you only believe the things you see
They said: No I dont believe in magic, nor in fantasy
I said: Well the thing that I saw, If it wasnt magic, what else could it be?"
What my thoughst are
The day kills me
In my crying heart
Everytime I walk
I hear a wispher of a child
Every time I talk
I can hear her cry
But everytime I turn around
To look where she is
I start to taste blood in my mouth
But no matte how far I look
She isnt there
But one day
At my school
I saw a little face
I wasnt that moment very cool
Closer and closer
I walk to her
More and more
I scared her
Then I stading near her
My friends doesnt get it
I say: Over there..That little girl
They look, say they seen nothing and turn away
I point to the girl
And she start to cry
I tell my friends: "he wheres a pearl
And she crys!"
My friends started to look around
And say "I see nothing
I dont see a girl around
And either I dont hear a cry as a sound"
The girl still standing there
All alone and afraid
Trying to make something clear
For A moment I turn my face a way
But when I look again
She is still standing there
Try to tell me something
I try to understand and ignore my fear
Her face turns to white
Her mouth start to bleed
There comes a man at her side
I could hear her weep
The man takes the girl by her hand
The girl didnt want to come
He opens a gate..
It looks like I could see the sun
The girl staying wisphering,
To soft I couldnt hear
She started to screaming
Finally I could hear her voice
Behind her cry.
She tells me:"I am dark and lost"
She said:"Get me out of here
I cry every night and pray to the gods"
"I ask them for forgiveness,
But they dont accept
I am livind in my world of hopelessness
What did I do wrong"
The man next to her
Took her by her neck
Leaded her to a fire burn
Where she can rest
That night in my dream
She came to me again
Crying for her father
Crying for her Sisters dead
When I wake up
My friends ask me what was going on
I wanted to tell them
But I knew it was wrong
I ask them: Do believe in magic of only in realety?
Or do you only believe the things you see
They said: No I dont believe in magic, nor in fantasy
I said: Well the thing that I saw, If it wasnt magic, what else could it be?"
Reacties op dit gedicht
| gothicangel: | Vrijdag, april 30, 2004 17:15 |
| if it wasn't magic what els could it be echt geweldig | |
| The unreachable: | Donderdag, april 22, 2004 18:35 |
| Precies al een hele hoop fans ;-)...je ziet wel erg veel in je dromen hé? wauw...I think it's cool..and yeah, I really believe in magic, so you're not the only one! Keep dreaming, Darky, you can write great poetry about it...yeah, it's quit unique..I like it ;-) | |
| Zowi: | Zondag, april 18, 2004 16:04 |
| En over de titel dat maakt niet zoveel iut ik let nooit heel erg op de titel het gaat om het gedicht...ik zit zelf ook altijd zo van jah hoe moet ik dit nou noemen... love again |
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| Zowi: | Zondag, april 18, 2004 16:02 |
| ik moet er echt even helemaal realizeren dat ik gewoon hier achter me pc ben ik heb alles gezien voor me zonder te realizeren dat ik aan het lezen was dit is zo mooi en ik geloof in magic..niet persee in god maar zeker in een afterlife and in spirit's... I think this is beautyfull..it's very special!!1 liefs Zowi |
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| Butterfly: | Donderdag, april 15, 2004 21:14 |
| Zoals Cora al zegt, je word het verhaal gewoon ingetrokken.. tis net alsof je eht zelf beleeft... Supermooi gemaakt!! Knuffiej |
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| PoetMir: | Donderdag, april 15, 2004 20:38 |
| Ehh tis echt mooi.. Moet ervan traantjes laten vallen :$:$:$ echt heel mooi!! Kusje Mir |
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| ~Reality~: | Donderdag, april 15, 2004 20:38 |
| Ik vind de titel wel goed hoor. maar het gedicht vind ik nog beter!! Echt heel mooi! Ik denk dat er wel meer is dan reality, alleen wat...?? hmzzz... Maar echt heel mooi en vol gevoelens geschreven =) Heel veel liefs, |
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| P!nk Lady: | Donderdag, april 15, 2004 18:43 |
| Schitterend!! Met een grote nadruk!! Kuzzz!!! |
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| BloodElf: | Donderdag, april 15, 2004 17:12 |
| PRACHTIG!!! (maar das geen verassing meer bij jou!) |
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| deceiver: | Donderdag, april 15, 2004 16:59 |
| wauw, echt heel mooi!! en heb het vol spanning en met open mond gelezen! jouw manier van schrijven is erg beeldend! mooi! meer meer! =) *knuffel* |
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| Flu: | Donderdag, april 15, 2004 16:38 |
| This is a real good poem, keep on writing I really like the deep-lying of it. Keep on writing.... I like your style | |
| Dark Sinner : | Donderdag, april 15, 2004 16:36 |
| Het is She wears a pearl:S En de titel slaat weer nergens op..Kvind het zo moeilijk om mijn gedichten een titel tegeven:S! |
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| Darkdevils-night: | Donderdag, april 15, 2004 16:35 |
| **diepe stilletje** wat is dit een prachtig magsich en ontroerend gedicht.. ik voel zoveel emoties, alsof ik echt in het verhaal getrokken wordt. echt super mooi geschreven, Dit noem ik echt een prachtig mooi subliem gedicht;) keep it going, I lite it Liefs en knuffels Cora |
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| Auteur: DarkSinner | 
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| Gepubliceerd op: 15 april 2004 | ||
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