Fantasy Wouds
I walk down to the sea
Into the dark night
Angels where calling to me
To fly at there side
As I walk next to the ocean
With a bird on my shoulder
Thinking about my emotion
It getting much colder
I walk and walk
whole night long
Later the bird start to talk
"This is the way you should go, that way is wrong!"
I was a little scared
I didnt know that birds talk
So we started to walk the way we dare
So we walk and walk
From the ocean into the wouds
Where little elfs flys
Where dear wolves looking for food
And the trees wispering by your side
It was very nice
The elvenking came to me
to give me some advise
I shake my head, I couldnt believe this is real
So going on on my way
But it gets darker then dark
It was quit even the elves didnt say
There was no light, not a single mark
I was going on
trees look like they where dead
I couldnt see a single shine of the sun
The animals where sad
It was cold
and lonely
Knifes where pussing in my soul
Crying against fear only
I wanted it to go back
but I couldnt
My heart said "go on
You can do it!"
So I walk and walk
The bird I my shoulder was gone
I had no body to talk
This was so wrong
All the eyes where cold
All the smiles where dead
All the thoughts where frozen
All the feelings where sad
But I was still walking
In this dying wouds
I was shaking
tears where falling in my wounds
But there, far behind
I see a spark
A spark of light
There was the end of the dark
I run to it
But far I didnt get
Something stopt me
The spark was running away from me
I run and run
This was the night mare of all
Fighting against every tree that stops me
Standing every time up when I fall
My heart bounds in my throat
My muscels started to hurt
Looks like a neverending road
My feets started to burn
But I still was running
I will catch the light
To a world that is sunny
To the ending night
But then when I thought that
the light wasnt running away anymore
I was happy but at same time mad
As I walk through that door
There I stand again
next to the sea
Now I know what that wouds was
Is was my woud of emontion
That we share.........you and me!
Into the dark night
Angels where calling to me
To fly at there side
As I walk next to the ocean
With a bird on my shoulder
Thinking about my emotion
It getting much colder
I walk and walk
whole night long
Later the bird start to talk
"This is the way you should go, that way is wrong!"
I was a little scared
I didnt know that birds talk
So we started to walk the way we dare
So we walk and walk
From the ocean into the wouds
Where little elfs flys
Where dear wolves looking for food
And the trees wispering by your side
It was very nice
The elvenking came to me
to give me some advise
I shake my head, I couldnt believe this is real
So going on on my way
But it gets darker then dark
It was quit even the elves didnt say
There was no light, not a single mark
I was going on
trees look like they where dead
I couldnt see a single shine of the sun
The animals where sad
It was cold
and lonely
Knifes where pussing in my soul
Crying against fear only
I wanted it to go back
but I couldnt
My heart said "go on
You can do it!"
So I walk and walk
The bird I my shoulder was gone
I had no body to talk
This was so wrong
All the eyes where cold
All the smiles where dead
All the thoughts where frozen
All the feelings where sad
But I was still walking
In this dying wouds
I was shaking
tears where falling in my wounds
But there, far behind
I see a spark
A spark of light
There was the end of the dark
I run to it
But far I didnt get
Something stopt me
The spark was running away from me
I run and run
This was the night mare of all
Fighting against every tree that stops me
Standing every time up when I fall
My heart bounds in my throat
My muscels started to hurt
Looks like a neverending road
My feets started to burn
But I still was running
I will catch the light
To a world that is sunny
To the ending night
But then when I thought that
the light wasnt running away anymore
I was happy but at same time mad
As I walk through that door
There I stand again
next to the sea
Now I know what that wouds was
Is was my woud of emontion
That we share.........you and me!
Reacties op dit gedicht
| The unreachable: | Woensdag, mei 05, 2004 14:43 |
| Extremely good! Jij hebt echt wel veel fantasie! Wauw..Ik wou dat ik zoiets kon...Jep, you just saw a spark of jealousy in my eye..hehe.. | |
| Proserphine: | Woensdag, mei 05, 2004 09:23 |
| I love it! | |
| 13 candles: | Maandag, mei 03, 2004 12:05 |
| mooi hoor... ga zo door... xxxx |
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| ~Reality~: | Zondag, mei 02, 2004 13:40 |
| Woeii geweldig gwoon =) Hoog belevingsgehalte =D Veel sterkte Liefs, FrozenSIlence |
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| gothicangel: | Zaterdag, mei 01, 2004 21:52 |
| wauw ik zie het gewoon helemaal voor me als of ik zelf diegene ben die zo dat pad loop echt super maar dat had ik niet anders verwacht van jou kus |
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| Wicked Soul: | Zaterdag, mei 01, 2004 17:43 |
| Oh krijgertje, I just adore it! MACHTIG! Take care, Big hugzzz -Lien.- |
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| FrozenScar: | Zaterdag, mei 01, 2004 16:23 |
| Love, LoVe, LOVE IT!! |
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| Simone15: | Zaterdag, mei 01, 2004 14:22 |
| woooow! Echt mooi, vooral dit stukje: All the eyes where cold All the smiles where dead All the thoughts where frozen All the feelings where sad Echt prachtig! -xxx- Simone |
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| Bless_The_Goth!: | Zaterdag, mei 01, 2004 12:47 |
| het was net of ik een verhaal beleefde! ik kon het voor mijn ogen zien afspelen! je kan echt prachtich schrijven, meis, veel sterkte kussss |
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| BloodElf: | Zaterdag, mei 01, 2004 12:34 |
| *zucht even heeel diep* Pfffff... zo daar was het einde ^_^ jeetje wat kan jij lang in je gedichten zitten zeg, Ik kwam bijna niet meer uit je verhaal ;o) Ik vind echt dat je een prachtige schrijfstijl hebt, Zo ontzettend wonderbaarlijk!! je hebt echt talent =) Liefs, |
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| Auteur: DarkSinner | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Carama | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 01 mei 2004 | ||
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