The Vampire in me
High on the mountain top
stands a castle of horror
Your living up
living in sorrow
I go to that castle
and when I come inside
A bloody battle
came infront of my eyes
Than horror begin
I walk father to see
Things that lies here, a chair, a rob so tin
A cold breath I feel
Than a man came to me
smiles so big
I could see his teeth
2 very pointy I see
He was tall and walked in black
His white face
And blood came from is his neck
His eyes where green
His hair was black
His hand I couldnt see
But the blood drups in his neck *brrr*
He took my hand
Introduced me to his friends
They look very strange
Abnormal I ment
One looks like a wolf
The other as a zombie
The wolfs name was Dolf
And the zombie kind called: Robby
We go to the dining room
The scary paintings on the walls
I just wanted to leave soon
But first we have to go to the hall
When we get there
I get a cop of thee
Tast strange
If you ask me
The man in black
his name was Draco
His return was very fast
I thought he is pysco
But that wasnt it
At night in the dark
I wake up
in my neck looks like a mark
2 teeth marks sitting there
I opend my mouth
I wanted to go look in the mirror,
But I couldnt see myself, I wasnt there
I walked down
Feeling blood in my neck
I was hungry
But not in a move for a snack
I went to the window
To look at the sea
See far away a willow
But I couldnt see me
I started to think
Tast blood in my mouth
I started to sink
The Vampire in me I found
stands a castle of horror
Your living up
living in sorrow
I go to that castle
and when I come inside
A bloody battle
came infront of my eyes
Than horror begin
I walk father to see
Things that lies here, a chair, a rob so tin
A cold breath I feel
Than a man came to me
smiles so big
I could see his teeth
2 very pointy I see
He was tall and walked in black
His white face
And blood came from is his neck
His eyes where green
His hair was black
His hand I couldnt see
But the blood drups in his neck *brrr*
He took my hand
Introduced me to his friends
They look very strange
Abnormal I ment
One looks like a wolf
The other as a zombie
The wolfs name was Dolf
And the zombie kind called: Robby
We go to the dining room
The scary paintings on the walls
I just wanted to leave soon
But first we have to go to the hall
When we get there
I get a cop of thee
Tast strange
If you ask me
The man in black
his name was Draco
His return was very fast
I thought he is pysco
But that wasnt it
At night in the dark
I wake up
in my neck looks like a mark
2 teeth marks sitting there
I opend my mouth
I wanted to go look in the mirror,
But I couldnt see myself, I wasnt there
I walked down
Feeling blood in my neck
I was hungry
But not in a move for a snack
I went to the window
To look at the sea
See far away a willow
But I couldnt see me
I started to think
Tast blood in my mouth
I started to sink
The Vampire in me I found
Reacties op dit gedicht
| ensomana: | Woensdag, december 01, 2004 21:10 |
| Beautiful :) |
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| Roxz: | Zondag, juni 13, 2004 14:16 |
| cool gedichtje;) I like that kind of fantasy style;) x Roxxz | |
| Wicked Soul: | Donderdag, mei 06, 2004 16:22 |
| !WEIRD! Gebrek aan fantasie? No way Dani. Trouwes je engels is helemaal niet slecht. Geloof me. Love, xxx -Lien.- |
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| FrozenScar: | Donderdag, mei 06, 2004 13:39 |
| AMAZING!!! |
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| gothicangel: | Woensdag, mei 05, 2004 15:33 |
| wauw echt geweldig en so what dat het engels niet klopt daar gaat het toch helemaal niet om het is een super mooi gedicht |
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| The unreachable: | Woensdag, mei 05, 2004 14:47 |
| It's been an honor to read this... | |
| sharon: | Woensdag, mei 05, 2004 14:44 |
| Gaaaaaaaaaf..... mijn complimenten! =) khouw wel van zulke gedichten ;) xXx Shar |
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| 13 candles: | Dinsdag, mei 04, 2004 21:38 |
| hihihihi, echt leuk. grappig hey......tjah zo kan het ook.....very nice...aaaaanijs. XXXXXXXXXXXXX |
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| ~Reality~: | Dinsdag, mei 04, 2004 19:13 |
| *OpEnNeerJump* Woeii like it a lot!! Alleen aant begin niet steeds And Then... Verder: Super!! Moet nu weg... Liefs, SnowWhiteSuicide |
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| Flu: | Dinsdag, mei 04, 2004 18:48 |
| The last part is really good. Try to keep the place more a mystery it will make your fantasy come back... I really do like your writing. Greatings a fan of yours. | |
| Bless_The_Goth!: | Dinsdag, mei 04, 2004 18:34 |
| WAUW!!!!!! hola, dat vindt ik prachtig geschreven :-o zoals bij je andere gedichten, kan ik de beelden voor mijn ogen zien afspelen! vindt het echt prachtig! meer kan ik niet zeggen! blijf zo schrijven :-D, de laat mijn nekharen overijnd staan! liefs X |
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| Níka: | Dinsdag, mei 04, 2004 12:55 |
| Hoi! 'k wilde iets schrijven maar ja, laat maar. Leuk gevonden. Liefs, |
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| Dark Sinner : | Dinsdag, mei 04, 2004 12:12 |
| Op mn engels moet je al helemaal niet letten;) |
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| Marble: | Dinsdag, mei 04, 2004 12:02 |
| Dolfje Weeeeeeer-wool-fjuuuh!!!! Haha, grappig bedacht, zeker teveel Van Helsing gezien ;) Marble. Ik denk dat er eerder iets scheelt aan de engelse grammatica dan aan het gedicht zelf, verder niet erg ovzo, maargoed. Ik dacht, ik zeg het even ^__^ |
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| Dark Sinner : | Dinsdag, mei 04, 2004 11:18 |
| Jah ik weet het...Het gedicht stinkt!! Fantasie gebrek!!! | |
| de nifter: | Dinsdag, mei 04, 2004 10:55 |
| tja, wat zal er straks op tafel staan.... | |
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| Gecontroleerd door: michris | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 04 mei 2004 | ||
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