*Love*
Seeing the oceans of believe
Reaching out for your hand
Let me show you how I feel
Lead me into your promise land
Reaching out for the stars
Thats shines upon the leaves
Healing those magical scars
Breaking those who decieved
But when you start to like in athors ways
In a direction of magic
Reach the souls and say
Isnt it fantastic
Leaving those moons that has shine in you
Crying those stars, it will end soon
Believe in the things that you have
And hold on to them
cause as magice exist
your the one of them
You hold me tight in your arms
Kiss me so soft
It feels so warm
Like heaven above
But then something terrible happends
It was so horrible.
He was Holding me tight in his arms
And then...
Then...........
Then I wake up!
Reaching out for your hand
Let me show you how I feel
Lead me into your promise land
Reaching out for the stars
Thats shines upon the leaves
Healing those magical scars
Breaking those who decieved
But when you start to like in athors ways
In a direction of magic
Reach the souls and say
Isnt it fantastic
Leaving those moons that has shine in you
Crying those stars, it will end soon
Believe in the things that you have
And hold on to them
cause as magice exist
your the one of them
You hold me tight in your arms
Kiss me so soft
It feels so warm
Like heaven above
But then something terrible happends
It was so horrible.
He was Holding me tight in his arms
And then...
Then...........
Then I wake up!
Reacties op dit gedicht
| The unreachable: | Woensdag, juni 23, 2004 14:18 |
| I agree with gothicangel.. | |
| gothicangel: | Zondag, mei 09, 2004 11:15 |
| leuk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! vooral dat einde met al de regels er tussen echt super leuk gedaan |
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| *..Missiesmiej..*: | Zaterdag, mei 08, 2004 23:32 |
| wauW...keep writhing.! dikke X-_-_-rianne |
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| Bless_The_Goth!: | Zaterdag, mei 08, 2004 13:20 |
| hoi lieverd, dit vindt ik prachtig!!!!zoals de rest van je fantastische gedichten!!! het einde is idd wat minder leu :-(, maar de ware komt nog naar je toe, wees daar maar zeker van!!!! sterkte lief x |
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| P!nk Lady: | Zaterdag, mei 08, 2004 12:43 |
| Echt een prachtig poem meiz!! Hopend dat je dit ooit mag meemaken zonder wakker te worden!! | |
| Proserphine: | Zaterdag, mei 08, 2004 12:33 |
| I adore your writing. Liefs P,- |
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| Darkdevils-night: | Zaterdag, mei 08, 2004 12:32 |
| **wauw** super verwoord, prachtig helaas wat minder leuk einde:( maar ooit komt de dag dat je niet wakker gemaakt wordt, want dat blijkt dat heel deze ervaring niet in je dromen bestond maar in de realiteit.. vooral de ééna laatste strofe vind ik prachtig, liefs en knuffel Cora |
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Over dit gedicht
| Auteur: DarkSinner | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Carama | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 08 mei 2004 | ||
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