Goodbye everybody
Well well here I stand
crying in the dark
feeling depress
leaving a dying mark
I want to thank a few people
who has stand next to me
trust me, give me there hand
told me how they feel
A special thank to WickedSoul
I never thought I would met some one like you
You could make me laught
No matter what you where always there
You get a big place in my heart
and no one can send you away
already from the start
i knew that you will be there ever day
You hold my hands in hard times
You give me love through the internet
You could always make me smile
Even when I was mad
I was always hoping to speak to you
You just could send me positive sunlighting without knowing it
But I dont diserved you, and Im still standing for that
You send me mails, wondering where I was..
I never had that..
I never thought I would ever get that
That some one would care about me
You give me love
And I hope I could give it back to you
Only thing I wanted to say
was I love you and I always will do
Next special thank is to Gothic Angel
You hurt me without knowing it
But it was my own fault
I was the one who wrote the Pissed off thing
I know Ive hurt you too
And I never ment to
I dont diserve somebody like you
I just want to thank you
Even Im out of words
Still Im searching with my confussing mind
For answers to find
I will walk with you
I would love to take your hand
Even I know I made a big mistake
And Im so sorry for that
But I want you to know
Whatever happend I will always love you
Dont give up
And a special thank goes to Bless_The_Goths
I always could count on you
I just lost my words
So thank you, I love you
The last special thank goes to Deceiver..
You was always there
I hope you feel better now
Thanks for your support
Luf ya
Rest I want to thank of course: ~Reality~, The Unreachable, Dark_Devilsnight, Frozenscar, and the rest I forgot!
But I have to go now
Just keep on believing in your dreams
Never give up
And maby one day every warrior will rise inside!
Owyeah..something else I wanted too say
Poetry goes not about the laungage
But about the feeling that lies behind
I just wanted to say that....
Dont forget: Everybody is a WARRIOR inside!
Much Love
crying in the dark
feeling depress
leaving a dying mark
I want to thank a few people
who has stand next to me
trust me, give me there hand
told me how they feel
A special thank to WickedSoul
I never thought I would met some one like you
You could make me laught
No matter what you where always there
You get a big place in my heart
and no one can send you away
already from the start
i knew that you will be there ever day
You hold my hands in hard times
You give me love through the internet
You could always make me smile
Even when I was mad
I was always hoping to speak to you
You just could send me positive sunlighting without knowing it
But I dont diserved you, and Im still standing for that
You send me mails, wondering where I was..
I never had that..
I never thought I would ever get that
That some one would care about me
You give me love
And I hope I could give it back to you
Only thing I wanted to say
was I love you and I always will do
Next special thank is to Gothic Angel
You hurt me without knowing it
But it was my own fault
I was the one who wrote the Pissed off thing
I know Ive hurt you too
And I never ment to
I dont diserve somebody like you
I just want to thank you
Even Im out of words
Still Im searching with my confussing mind
For answers to find
I will walk with you
I would love to take your hand
Even I know I made a big mistake
And Im so sorry for that
But I want you to know
Whatever happend I will always love you
Dont give up
And a special thank goes to Bless_The_Goths
I always could count on you
I just lost my words
So thank you, I love you
The last special thank goes to Deceiver..
You was always there
I hope you feel better now
Thanks for your support
Luf ya
Rest I want to thank of course: ~Reality~, The Unreachable, Dark_Devilsnight, Frozenscar, and the rest I forgot!
But I have to go now
Just keep on believing in your dreams
Never give up
And maby one day every warrior will rise inside!
Owyeah..something else I wanted too say
Poetry goes not about the laungage
But about the feeling that lies behind
I just wanted to say that....
Dont forget: Everybody is a WARRIOR inside!
Much Love
Reacties op dit gedicht
| The unreachable: | Woensdag, juni 23, 2004 14:08 |
| Thanks...there's a warrior inside you too...remember that.. | |
| gothicangel: | Zondag, mei 16, 2004 10:45 |
| sorry dat ik nu pas reageer ik voel me heel gevleid voor dat je me bedankt dat ik veel voor jou beteken en je kan steunen door mijn reacties maar lieverd ga aub niet ik geniet van je gedichten en de manier waarop je ze schrijft en al die lieve reacties die ik van jou terug krijg zeg geen sorry voor iets waar je geen sorry voor hoeft te zeggen ik ben nooit boos op je geweest zo'n mooi pesoon als jij zou mij nooit kwaad kunnen doen en ik houd jou handen echt su |
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| SecretMistery : | Donderdag, mei 13, 2004 19:48 |
| No!don't go! :| I love your poems, I love your reactions...I just love you! =) I will always think of you and I hope that you'll never stop writhing! I think we all will see a book or something in the furure that's written by you! =) Love you ! =) xXx Shar (Sharon aka T-tears-S aka SecretMistery) |
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| Flu: | Donderdag, mei 13, 2004 19:21 |
| Maybe your just leaving a dying mark on your heart, life is to strong to let you go, It is impossible you leaving. The world needs your words. Your writing is so damn beautifull. You tell us everybody is a warrior inside, THEN FIGHT. You tell us don't give up, how can we believe your words if you are giving in. Stay, I beg you, don't give in to confusion, give in to hope. | |
| ~Reality~: | Donderdag, mei 13, 2004 19:17 |
| Why go away =( Love to read your poems. You're totally right about the language and feelings.. Don't know what's up.. but I hope you don't go away for eternaty!! I know that you deserve friendship and love. You have love inside.. that's why people love you back. Everybody is a WARRIOR inside! Remember that for yourself!! You're a warrior too! Don't you dare to forget that =) Wish you all the luck you need, and even more! Much love FrozenSilence aka R |
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| Bless_The_Goth!: | Donderdag, mei 13, 2004 17:29 |
| nou hebbik tranen in me ogen! :'(, don't go, I like you too mutch to let you go!!!! lieffie, je mag niet gaan, ik geniet echt van je gedichten! je bent een echte schat van een mensje! geloof in je zelf. ik zal 100de kaarsjes branden!(op ze'n heksjes) lieffie, geef niet op, ben altijd bij je :-) kus! Leen |
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| Wicked Soul: | Donderdag, mei 13, 2004 16:59 |
| Ow ja: en je geeft me veel terug al besef je dat misschien niet, maar gewoon dit gedicht en al die keren dat we mekaar spraken, alsk jou een klein beetje een beter gevoel kan bezorgen, word ik daar ook een beetje blijer om he schatje. Don't you dare to think you don't mean anything to me. You're in my heart honey. Forever. BIG BIG BIG HUGZZZZ -Lien.- |
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| Wicked Soul: | Donderdag, mei 13, 2004 16:54 |
| Damn girl, this makes me cry. Denk maar niet dat je zo afscheid van me kan nemen. Klaat jou nie gaan Dani. Zeg niet da je nie verdient wak je geef want je verdient het zeker wel en nog veel meer. Kzie je graag meisje. I'll stand by your side till the end of time. Owkeej? Take care sugar -Lien.- |
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| BloodElf: | Donderdag, mei 13, 2004 13:19 |
| Ik zeg alleen maar eeen hoi!! die gedag zeggen we een andere keer wel =) Liefs, |
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| deceiver: | Woensdag, mei 12, 2004 23:06 |
| owja, wil niet dat je gaat :'( | |
| deceiver: | Woensdag, mei 12, 2004 23:03 |
| *stil* lieve meis, een erg mooi gedicht, maar een te trieste boodschap, dit kun je toch niet menen he, je blijft toch zeker wel bij ons!! zoveel mensne genieten van jouw dichies, en hebben er ook echt wat ook! steun en liefde halen ze eruit of juist gewoon even heerlijk genieten bij de wereld die jij creeert met je gedichten.... als je tijd voor jezelf wilt, moet je die zeker nemen, ik zal de laatste zijn die jou tegenhoud, kom even lekker tot jezelf, maar je moet me een ding b |
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| Darkdevils-night: | Woensdag, mei 12, 2004 21:52 |
| Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeej...Waar ga jij heen!!!!!!! **duiveltje kijkt vluchtig om zich heen....** Jij hele lieve dark sinner.. wat ben je van plan??? Jij gaat toch geen gekke dingen doen hey:s.. want dan kom ik je persoonlijk opzoeken hoor, Ik wil je hier helemaal neit missen:( en ben echt neit de enige, je gedicht zijn super en je aanwezigheid zeker gewaardeerd.. **Duiveltje krijgt traantjes..Wrom??...** Heel lief gedichtje trouwens, maar ik hoop toch dat je |
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| Auteur: DarkSinner | 
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| Gepubliceerd op: 12 mei 2004 | ||
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