-Crying Black Tears-
-Crying Black Tears-
As I start watching how she bleeds
Feeding the darkness inside her
With the pain it needs
The floor becomes slowly painted red
She's crying black tears
Crying for all the love she shed
Crying for help, but nobody hears
Her broken voice
And nobody sees
Her fading strength
Her sparkle of light
Disappearing in the night
Because she gave up the fight
Her innocent soul taken away by Death
-Lien.-
-17/5/2004-
Reacties op dit gedicht
| life~in~every~breath~: | Vrijdag, november 19, 2004 13:44 |
| amazing... veel liefs, |
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| Me&MyTears: | Donderdag, mei 20, 2004 19:01 |
| woow.. zo mooi.. echt super.. *speechless* -Hold on, Take Care, Big Hug- |
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| Dark Sinner : | Woensdag, mei 19, 2004 19:51 |
| Wauw...erg herkenbaar!! Prachtig geschreven...Keep The Good Work!! Sterkte Dikkuh xus |
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| TearsxPain: | Woensdag, mei 19, 2004 16:36 |
| Prachtig *SprakeLoOz* Oh zO moOii! x |
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| ~Reality~: | Dinsdag, mei 18, 2004 19:29 |
| =( Wauw.. geweldig mooi en triest geschreven! ''Her innocent soul taken away by Death '' -- Amazing writen!! Love and take care, FrozenSilence |
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| P!nk Lady: | Dinsdag, mei 18, 2004 16:55 |
| PRACHTIG!!!! Staat hier met haar o zo gekende ope mond!!! |
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| Frozen Angel: | Dinsdag, mei 18, 2004 16:49 |
| Heeeeell mooi!! Groetjes, Frozen Angel |
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| Gwenneke: | Maandag, mei 17, 2004 20:35 |
| heel mooi gedichtje , maar zo droevig ! sterkte ! -x- Liefs , Gwenneke -x- |
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| Precious Things: | Maandag, mei 17, 2004 19:37 |
| Very beautiful, |
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| Fading Away: | Maandag, mei 17, 2004 19:36 |
| Silence... I deeply respect your poem.. beautiful, but ow.. how sad.. *tears* I wish I could help you.. please, hold on, don't give up this fight, you don't deserve this darkness.. Take care, -Heel veel sterkte- Fading Away Fading Away |
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Over dit gedicht
| Auteur: Wicked Soul | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: michris | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 17 mei 2004 | ||
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