The Sun Looks So Far Away
Feelings keep lying against my heart
Faults are making themselves visibly
Hated sparks keep raining from the sky
Painful words made me drown inside the burning sea
Visions in life
I wish I never saw
Reflections on a knife
I wished I’d never draw
Tearful my mind kept spinning around empty thoughts
Hopelessly I kept searching your arms around
Breathing in air I never saw as real in my life
Full of fear I captured the hardest pain I found
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Juudtt: | Donderdag, juni 28, 2007 14:41 |
| Mooihoor! :) Vooral de 2e alinea! Prachtig bedacht |
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| lost_paradise: | Donderdag, november 25, 2004 21:23 |
| weer een prachtig gedicht! xxx jlien |
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| *iif.ever: | Zaterdag, mei 29, 2004 11:23 |
| heel mooi! | |
| P!nk Lady: | Donderdag, mei 20, 2004 18:27 |
| BEAUTIFULL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So good..... |
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| Lost_Angel: | Woensdag, mei 19, 2004 23:54 |
| Wow..echt een toppertje dit gedichtje..mooi! But..*hands over a lovely candle* Here, this is for you..let it melt away all those bad things in your life, and give you some warmth back.. Much Love, |
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| 13 candles: | Woensdag, mei 19, 2004 20:53 |
| hey lief elfjuh........ the sun.....I give you stars. beautyfull!!!! XXXXX and lots of love from me.. |
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| sick suicide: | Woensdag, mei 19, 2004 20:42 |
| uhm net als wat iedereen zegt je bent niet alleen maar toch tja :)xxxdikke knuffel oja hets erg mooi |
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| ~Reality~: | Woensdag, mei 19, 2004 19:59 |
| The sun is far far away, but you can feel it. Shining on you!! Sweet elfje, please don't give up now. You've come so far... don't you dare to give up now =( KNUFFOL!! |
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| Fading Away: | Woensdag, mei 19, 2004 18:40 |
| Oh, how beautiful.. I'm so sorry you're feeling like this, but I see my face in your words, so please don't think your alone.. 'cause there will always be people who want to help you.. I do.. Love, Fading Away |
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Over dit gedicht
| Auteur: FrogCess | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Sheena | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 19 mei 2004 | ||
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