Reversed Pain
These dreams of mine
Crushed by me
I have crossed the line
As you can see
Pain is my guilt
My sadness is worse
Inside of me, a temple was built
To mourne my curse
Happiness is my tears
Mistaken by the eye
It retreats from my fears
Wishing it would die
Only this i have been suffering
Feeling only tourture
These feelings have only been covering
What I do not know for sure
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Misty and Me: | Woensdag, juni 02, 2004 21:11 |
| steeds blijf je me verbazen steeds verbetert je wijze van schrijven blijf stilletjes door je leven grazen en probeer nog lang bij je vrienden te blijven.... xxx |
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| ~Reality~: | Vrijdag, mei 21, 2004 20:30 |
| Geweldig mooi geschreven =) Liefs, |
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| Wicked Soul: | Vrijdag, mei 21, 2004 20:04 |
| MOOI MOOI MOOI MOOI MOOI!!!! I absolutely adore this one. Meer van dit! ;) | |
| Tim Mooij: | Vrijdag, mei 21, 2004 16:02 |
| This is by far one of the best ones I've read on this site. this could easily fit in with the great poets of old times I do admire your work, really I do. (only the word is torture ;) greetings Tim |
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| P!nk Lady: | Vrijdag, mei 21, 2004 14:01 |
| Mooie poemz!! Kuzz!! |
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| Fading Away: | Vrijdag, mei 21, 2004 12:58 |
| I love this poem, wow, beautiful.. Love, Fading Away |
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Over dit gedicht
| Auteur: Doom | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Carama | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 21 mei 2004 | ||
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