Saved by my friend...
Saved by my friend...
Standing all alone
In the moon his light
Thinking of my dark life
Just as the night
My hands both bound
Trough a strong, silver chain
The night gets darker
And my body is full with pain
My love slides from my heart
Slowly disappear all my fears
My face is getting wet
Trough my blood-red tears
Slowly the stars appear
The moon his light dip
Then suddenly I see a fierce light
A hand show up, invite me for a trip
It’s so attractive
Just to go and let everything behind me
Enjoy of the love and happiness above
Finally live how it’s supposed to be
But then I hear a voice
Begging I have to stay
Tears rolling over my cheek
I’m so confused, I want to go my own way
I close my eyes, and think
Vague images fly past
Good memories with my family and friends
It has gone so fast
When I open my eyes
I’ve got a dark red rose in my hand
A soft voice is talking to me
And then I know who saved me, my best friend
Laura
Standing all alone
In the moon his light
Thinking of my dark life
Just as the night
My hands both bound
Trough a strong, silver chain
The night gets darker
And my body is full with pain
My love slides from my heart
Slowly disappear all my fears
My face is getting wet
Trough my blood-red tears
Slowly the stars appear
The moon his light dip
Then suddenly I see a fierce light
A hand show up, invite me for a trip
It’s so attractive
Just to go and let everything behind me
Enjoy of the love and happiness above
Finally live how it’s supposed to be
But then I hear a voice
Begging I have to stay
Tears rolling over my cheek
I’m so confused, I want to go my own way
I close my eyes, and think
Vague images fly past
Good memories with my family and friends
It has gone so fast
When I open my eyes
I’ve got a dark red rose in my hand
A soft voice is talking to me
And then I know who saved me, my best friend
Laura
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Fantasy: | Vrijdag, mei 14, 2010 10:03 |
| In stilte gelzen. Echt prachtig geschreven;) |
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| Darkdevils-night: | Zaterdag, juni 05, 2004 11:55 |
| super wijffie.. echt zo goed verwoord, jij bent echt mega goed in je gedichtjes vooral de fictie's ik vind ze echt geweldig.. *glimlach* Liefs en knuffel Cora |
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| ~*Woepiej*~: | Vrijdag, juni 04, 2004 21:27 |
| WAUW WAUW meisie echt super geweldig kei super geweldig *oke oke* Moooooj =D kuzz |
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| *hush*: | Vrijdag, juni 04, 2004 18:40 |
| woow! mooi neergezet... en fictie! ik vind het egt zo knap van je dat je je zulke dingen in kan beelden en dan nog zo realistisch opschrijft! kus, Nikki |
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Over dit gedicht
| Auteur: Laura Luijkx | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: maneschijn | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 04 juni 2004 | ||
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