Death is coming!
Death is coming
Hello darkness, my dear friend
Here I stand talking to you again.
My faith is running, I cant turn
Your the only one who let me burn
Hello my dear fear
How are you, my dear?
Still screaming in me to get out
I hear your voice, very loud
Hi my falling tear
Crying again, does it feel clear?
Because of you I can sleep well
Dwelling in my mind the storys you tell
Hello my sweet broken heart
Again those lies torn you apart?!
They are not nice I know
Maby it is better for you to go..
Here my dear sadness
take my all of my happiness
My friend darkness
Lead me into hopelessness
My frozen eyes dwelling around
My broken ears, dont hear a sound
My voice broken in 2
My heart died in you
My friend, Darkness, My pain.
You where the one who leaded me into this game
The battle I have fight, I have lost
Im sorry I disepointed you, I die, I must
I know you will hang me, like a rose of the dead
But for once you see my tear of happiness
You push my soul out, now I know what it was
It was the dead that was calling to me, Im the one he wants!
Dragged me into suffering, hurt my body
Dead is coming I can feel it
He covert me in black
Just like my heart
Into my sadness
My tears trowing apart
Hello there, My dear death
Take me with you, I dont diserve to life
You pushed me, you pulling at me, I cant stand
The way you hurting me, with your hand
Please, my darkness, my tear
My dear sadness, my fear
My dear death, my dying heart
Please let me go with you, become one part
My dear friends, even you hurting me
You where always there and maked me believe
You made me see and realise
That death want my soul, to take every thing from the inside!
*Death ask for it, he will get it*
Hello darkness, my dear friend
Here I stand talking to you again.
My faith is running, I cant turn
Your the only one who let me burn
Hello my dear fear
How are you, my dear?
Still screaming in me to get out
I hear your voice, very loud
Hi my falling tear
Crying again, does it feel clear?
Because of you I can sleep well
Dwelling in my mind the storys you tell
Hello my sweet broken heart
Again those lies torn you apart?!
They are not nice I know
Maby it is better for you to go..
Here my dear sadness
take my all of my happiness
My friend darkness
Lead me into hopelessness
My frozen eyes dwelling around
My broken ears, dont hear a sound
My voice broken in 2
My heart died in you
My friend, Darkness, My pain.
You where the one who leaded me into this game
The battle I have fight, I have lost
Im sorry I disepointed you, I die, I must
I know you will hang me, like a rose of the dead
But for once you see my tear of happiness
You push my soul out, now I know what it was
It was the dead that was calling to me, Im the one he wants!
Dragged me into suffering, hurt my body
Dead is coming I can feel it
He covert me in black
Just like my heart
Into my sadness
My tears trowing apart
Hello there, My dear death
Take me with you, I dont diserve to life
You pushed me, you pulling at me, I cant stand
The way you hurting me, with your hand
Please, my darkness, my tear
My dear sadness, my fear
My dear death, my dying heart
Please let me go with you, become one part
My dear friends, even you hurting me
You where always there and maked me believe
You made me see and realise
That death want my soul, to take every thing from the inside!
*Death ask for it, he will get it*
Reacties op dit gedicht
| The unreachable: | Maandag, juni 28, 2004 17:13 |
| Super!! | |
| gothicangel: | Maandag, juni 28, 2004 13:16 |
| heel erg mooi gedicht maar ook heel erg triest ik kreeg een brok in mijn keel vooral toen ik dat stuk las de dood is mijn vriend weet dat dat niet zo is geef niet op niet nu ja al zo ver bent gekomen je bent een geweldige dichteres en ik geef erg veel om jou jij hebt mij heel erg geholpen nu is het mijn tijd om jou te helpen en jou uit dat zwarte gat te trekken en misschien gebeurd dat niet gelijk maar we komen er wel samen zijn we sterk houd moed liefs |
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| Bless The Goth: | Maandag, juni 28, 2004 09:50 |
| I forgot, GREAT POEM :-D | |
| Bless The Goth: | Maandag, juni 28, 2004 09:49 |
| *krijgt traantjes in de ogen* lieve Dani, please don't leave us..don't go with the death, fight against it! pul yourself out of the darkness! I will always be by your side! holding you and loving you(as a friend :))I'll never let you go!!!! Love ya(as a friend again(before you going to think thinks ;-))) please call me if somethings wrong, maybe there's nothing, but I'm worried.... *holding you so tight* dikke kus, leen |
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| Melodramatically: | Zaterdag, juni 26, 2004 22:27 |
| *stilte* Een heel erg mooi gedicht! Serieus.. Alleen zit er zoveel pijn achter, dat het me hart doet breken.. Ik wil echt niet dat je je laat meenemen door de dood.. Blijf hier.. Vecht ajb! *smeek* Liefs, Melodramatically |
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| Wicked Soul: | Zaterdag, juni 26, 2004 19:29 |
| Het is een heel mooi gedicht. Maar Dani, de tranen staan in m'n ogen en ik weet echt niet meer wat te zeggen. Als je het nodig hebt, laat me je dan alsjeblief helpen. Die Dood moet nog een heleboel jaartjes wachten voor ie jou te pakken krijgt hoor. Ik wil jou niet kwijt. Je betekent zoveel voor me lieverd. Geef alsjeblief niet toe. Ik heb je nodig. En er zijn er nog die je nodig hebben. Volhouden schatje. Warm embrace, x, -Lien.- |
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| Fading Away: | Zaterdag, juni 26, 2004 18:31 |
| *Speachless* I'm sitting here, and feeling nothing, nothing but sadness, in your poem. It must be so hard for you, I feel it. But please, don't leave us.. I won't let you go. 'Cause I hope that one day you'll see; you're so much more than only sadness.. Take care, Kusje, |
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| Auteur: DarkSinner | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: christina | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 26 juni 2004 | ||
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