Unspoken
Unspoken words burn the skin
As silence torches as a flaming spark
It tears the flesh of the tortured one
It rips the air and cuts the dark...
It'll burn this place down
Only a moment, all will go up in flames
As the fires of most private tortures
Are only bound to grow immense
Can I say anything more?
Can I desperatly try to prevent it?
Or is this castle ought to go down
To glow forever in the forcefull blaze...
Reacties op dit gedicht
| ~Tanith~: | Donderdag, juli 01, 2004 10:56 |
| Thank You ;) | |
| The unreachable: | Woensdag, juni 30, 2004 11:30 |
| Outstanding!! very very very nice! I enjoyed every word..wonderfull poem!! You're a true talent... | |
| ~Tanith~: | Dinsdag, juni 29, 2004 16:47 |
| as silence torches as a flaming sparks kan ook geschreven worden: as silence burns.... As the fires of the most private torutures: while the fires... are bound to... als je het in zijn geheel leest kan die as vervangen worden door while of because ;) and thanx ;) Maria |
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| Cappy: | Dinsdag, juni 29, 2004 15:56 |
| As silence torches as a flaming spark As the fires of most private tortures bij die 2 zinnen kom ik er niet meer uit.denk dat of je verwisseld de woorden of de betekenis van de woorden. Je stijl is aantrekkelijk. regards, |
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| Auteur: ~Tanith~ | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Firebolt | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 29 juni 2004 | ||
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