Lonely body -falling in the deep-
A cold wind
-like a kiss,-
on a lonely body...
Why did u had to go?
And dissapear from my thoughts?
You gave me the power to forget everything,
Why don't you come back?
It's just a silent
wish in the night
I can't live without
you anymore
It's like running naked
in a dark woods
Screaming your name
but nobody hears me,
-Falling in the deep,
Where i will find myself...-
-like a kiss,-
on a lonely body...
Why did u had to go?
And dissapear from my thoughts?
You gave me the power to forget everything,
Why don't you come back?
It's just a silent
wish in the night
I can't live without
you anymore
It's like running naked
in a dark woods
Screaming your name
but nobody hears me,
-Falling in the deep,
Where i will find myself...-
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Wicked Soul: | Dinsdag, juli 06, 2004 21:19 |
| Gekeurd en goed bevonden. ;) Expert ter zake aan het woord he(AHUM AHUM) :p ;) Nog beter ast eerste. Goeie dichter in wording. ;) -grijnst breed- Mooi mooi mooi. En de rest van de reacties volgen nog wel ze, as ge wa meer schrijft. Tot straks, ;):p Ya big sis (LOL!) |
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| cindy_pe_tindy: | Vrijdag, juli 02, 2004 13:50 |
| Ontroerend !! Veel sterkte !!! xxxxx | |
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| Gecontroleerd door: christina | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 02 juli 2004 | ||
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