every time
every tear you cry dehydrates me a little more
every painful scream you make, i feel multiplied by four
every time you are mistaking, i'm failing just a little
when you're misunderstanding, my world becomes a riddle
every time your life gets darker, my light fades away
every time that you get speechless, i don't know what to say
every time that you are cursing, i swear upon my life
when your suffering is cutting, i feel stabbed with a knife
every time that you are lacking, i'm missing a piece
every time you feel imprisonned, my freedom has been seised
every time you feel depressed, i'm singing another painful song
every time you're feeling bad, i'm suffering along
every painful scream you make, i feel multiplied by four
every time you are mistaking, i'm failing just a little
when you're misunderstanding, my world becomes a riddle
every time your life gets darker, my light fades away
every time that you get speechless, i don't know what to say
every time that you are cursing, i swear upon my life
when your suffering is cutting, i feel stabbed with a knife
every time that you are lacking, i'm missing a piece
every time you feel imprisonned, my freedom has been seised
every time you feel depressed, i'm singing another painful song
every time you're feeling bad, i'm suffering along
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Principessa: | Donderdag, augustus 12, 2004 22:03 |
| Ey schattie, dees gedicht vin ik 1 van u beste, ik kan et echt blijve en blijve leze.. krijg er telkes trane van in mijn oge.. XxX, Principessa |
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| The unreachable: | Dinsdag, juli 06, 2004 20:51 |
| Mooi gedichtje! Aan een vriendschap kan inderdaad ook veel verdriet vasthangen, zolang de vreugde maar overheerst, dan is alles oké..Take Care.. | |
| Wicked Soul: | Dinsdag, juli 06, 2004 12:29 |
| Zullen we dat van die gebrekkige commentaar effe oplossen? ;) Ze zullen je hier wel heel snel leren kennen op de site met zo'n prachtig gedicht. Thanks for your reaction on my latest by the way. Thought: gotta check this girl out and that's what I'm doin' en daar ben ik heel erg blij om. DIT IS SUBLIEME POEZIE! Echt heel erg mooi. Knuffel -Lien.- |
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| stairway 2 heaven: | Maandag, juli 05, 2004 23:27 |
| Hey honnepon! Supergedicht hoor! Heel mooi, en tbetekent veel voor de mensen die van u houden. (ni panikere als ge bij u eerste gedicht nog geen commentaar krijgt,had ik ook nl :) ) dikke kus xxx |
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| Auteur: strawberryswirl | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: michris | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 05 juli 2004 | ||
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