The dark creature in my land
The Dark Creature In My Land
The dark creature lead me through the sea
Through the deserts and throught the inner me.
And all I can see..
Is the path in front of me
He takes my hand..
Lead me throught the gates
The dark surround it,
I lose my faith
The yell of the dark
I hear it sing
Leafs his mark
And the scream
The trees his soul dwelling on the path
The animals are yelling
The wurms and mutts
Theyre soul is selling
The screams that leaves behind
When I walk the path
The trees looking at me with big yellow eyes
I had enough
But the dark creature holds me tide
I cant run
My hand is burning well I am in fight
I wish I could see the sun
My mind is spinning like wheels
My mouth is wet
The pain is the only thing That I feel
The dark I just met
The dark still around me
Horses and wolves on the run
Birds and Eagels hidding
Away from the sun
The losing touch of the cold hand
Like trees are wispering the sound
In my dark land
Is the place I found
Still the creature has my hand
Leaded me trought the dark land
Where Evil has his sorrow send
Where dreaming end
Reacties op dit gedicht
| gothicangel: | Maandag, juli 19, 2004 22:13 |
| wauw moet hem ff nog een keer lezen momentje hoor................ ja daar was ze weer moest ff bij komen van al die mooie woorden damn jij bent echt goed |
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| The unreachable: | Zaterdag, juli 10, 2004 19:55 |
| Prachtig!! | |
| Melodramatically: | Zaterdag, juli 10, 2004 16:06 |
| More beautiful than this, must be impossible! Liefs, Melodramatically |
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| Fading Away: | Zaterdag, juli 10, 2004 12:50 |
| So wonderfully written.. It sounds so familiar to me, though I know I can't help you as much as you need. 'Cause you need somebody who holds you.. And my arms are only words, but please believe me, I would reach my arms for you in real life if I were able to. Hold on, my dear. Liefs, |
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| Bless The Goth: | Zaterdag, juli 10, 2004 10:20 |
| *mondje valt wijd open*iek!!! mooi!!!! :-D, nou Daniëlle, ik denk dat die camping toch ergens goed voor is :-p.... mooi mooi mooi! :-p, wehehe(h), nahja.... please don't give up,* takes your hand with wicked soul* you go girl! this is realy beautifull!!! en laat dat ochtendhumeur maar zitten! want dit is echt mooi!!!!! *dikkuh knuffel* leentje |
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| BloodElf: | Vrijdag, juli 09, 2004 21:34 |
| YOU WRITE SUCH BEAUTIFULL STUFF!! I'm really a fan of yours, Maybe because I recognise me In your poems.. I really like that, maybe it's not your meaning but it breaks something in me... Something good ;o) Love, Elven |
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| Wicked Soul: | Vrijdag, juli 09, 2004 20:25 |
| :s Zuurstof! Snel! ;) :) Ik erf helemaal jullie taaltje over, maar what the hell I don't care: 'Jeemig Dani!' ;) Very beautiful again. You will see the sun again my little warrior. I promise. -kijkt plechtig- Take my hand. I'll guide you to the light. Sterkte sugar. Volhouden he. Je kan het best. Knuffel, x, -Lien.- |
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Over dit gedicht
| Auteur: DarkSinner | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: ~Marina~ | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 09 juli 2004 | ||
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