Commercial breakdown
I'm sick of these commercials
telling me what to do
whatever to buy in order to
get my mind polluted with
your Insta-pleasure (R) inactive superficial substitute for
happyness
an
anti-form of joy that only exists
out of the pleasure of the forsight
of buying something that will only miserate your life even
further
further to beyond the point of no return
because you won't feel any better once you've waisted all
you allmighty money on it
Your life is empty and so are your commercials
They suck themselves into my atention
blank gazes pulled towards the void in life that people call
TV
A commercial breakdown is what we need
to get people to get up and live again
read a book
climb a tree
listen to music
write some poetry
or whatever makes you smile
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Fading Away: | Maandag, juli 12, 2004 17:54 |
| Great, as always.. :) Man, I adore your writings.. Love, |
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| The unreachable: | Maandag, juli 12, 2004 17:26 |
| Wonderfull...a commercial breakdown..only you can write a poem like this.. | |
| FrozenScar: | Maandag, juli 12, 2004 16:48 |
| Hello, Hello... Here I am again ^__^ and what do my eyes see today?? A gorgeous (it couldn't be different) poem. may I? Read your poetry? To make me smile... Just once in a while?! I promise =$ |
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| -Ik-: | Maandag, juli 12, 2004 13:09 |
| Leuk bedacht:) | |
| Nooitgeweest: | Maandag, juli 12, 2004 13:08 |
| Helemaal mee eens... Throw away your television! Mooi geschreven :) Kusj, |
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| Oorlam: | Maandag, juli 12, 2004 13:02 |
| :-) ik ga dan altijd naar de w.c.; gelukkig moet ik nogal eens:-) | |
| el nifter: | Maandag, juli 12, 2004 13:00 |
| hee... zolang je de pastrelli's maar niet plet... maar even serieus.... mooie beteugelde razernij.... I like it!!! |
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| Melodramatically: | Maandag, juli 12, 2004 12:49 |
| Woow.. is only what I can say.. Liefs, Melodramatically |
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Over dit gedicht
| Auteur: Cypher-punks | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: christina | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 12 juli 2004 | ||
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