*you'll see*
salty reminders of the splinters and bursts
of you getting me up and then drop me
our oppinions collided, my world fell apart
and still you're attempting to stop me
in my struggle with captivity and fight with myself
i'm running out of ammo to fire
my greatest opponent, my own DNA
has told me to suppress my desire
these tears sting, my screams hurt
smiles make me suffer in my hypocrisy
trying to ban all the good out my life
won't let you go unpunished, you will see...
of you getting me up and then drop me
our oppinions collided, my world fell apart
and still you're attempting to stop me
in my struggle with captivity and fight with myself
i'm running out of ammo to fire
my greatest opponent, my own DNA
has told me to suppress my desire
these tears sting, my screams hurt
smiles make me suffer in my hypocrisy
trying to ban all the good out my life
won't let you go unpunished, you will see...
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Wicked Soul: | Maandag, juli 26, 2004 14:22 |
| Bij deze is m'n slaperige kop in een klap weer helder en klaarwakker. MMM MMM MMM! I adore you and your poems. Hoe je die woede en al je andere gevoelens uit. Machtig mooi. Knuffels, -Lien.- |
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| The unreachable: | Woensdag, juli 14, 2004 11:18 |
| "my greatest opponent, my own DNA" Hehe..Love your work.. | |
| el nifter: | Woensdag, juli 14, 2004 08:43 |
| hmmm... ja kwaad idd.... maarja.... better out than in.... (met dank aan shrek) | |
| stairway 2 heaven: | Dinsdag, juli 13, 2004 22:16 |
| tis een kwaad gedicht, maar honnie da komt wel goed, oke? dikke kus xxx |
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| Auteur: strawberryswirl | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Firebolt | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 13 juli 2004 | ||
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