eternal illusions
Thy sinful fear
Beheard as i speak
Shall I be judged
For being weak
Or will the elder be merciful
For what I fear
Ignorance surrounds
Show me the road ever clear
Behold my envious moon
By the powerful light you reflect
I promise thy for now
Gone I will be, I shall not resurrect
Brightened shall we see the sky
We shall drown my love
But all the stars shall lead us by
And lift us up to our place above
Beheard as i speak
Shall I be judged
For being weak
Or will the elder be merciful
For what I fear
Ignorance surrounds
Show me the road ever clear
Behold my envious moon
By the powerful light you reflect
I promise thy for now
Gone I will be, I shall not resurrect
Brightened shall we see the sky
We shall drown my love
But all the stars shall lead us by
And lift us up to our place above
Reacties op dit gedicht
| The unreachable: | Donderdag, juli 15, 2004 15:17 |
| Oeh..Classy! | |
| stairway 2 heaven: | Woensdag, juli 14, 2004 15:43 |
| mooi!! xx |
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| FrozenScar: | Woensdag, juli 14, 2004 15:11 |
| Oeh, zwaaar interesant verwoord!! Mooi zo die "verouderde" sprookjesachtige taal. Daar zweeft je gedicht op. Mooi.. echt prachtig |
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| strawberryswirl: | Woensdag, juli 14, 2004 12:07 |
| oh, ben ik de eerste reactiegever? weird...goeie gedichten krijgen normaal massa's comments, wel, dan zal ik maar beginne mej becomplimenteren :D is echt HEEL mooi geschreven, really!! ;) get er ne fan bij :p dikke bees: Leila |
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| Auteur: passive-agressive | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: ;o)x | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 14 juli 2004 | ||
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