Eventually I’ll bring victory
With all my respect,
but sometimes I really miss the Theme "Stenght"!
It hurts,
The pain,
It aches,
Not to return again
I’m so small
In this endless big whole
A stone rolls over my tongue
Ruining all the words I stole
Stolen from a book
Putted in my mouth
To get everything I feel
On someway out
It needs to be slipped away
It needs to hold a hand
Cause every light I follow
Leads me to an uncontrolled land
Of… The inner fight
I’m out of strength, I need to rest
I need to find myself again
Need a tool to fight with
They stole my words
And my heart
They stole my senses
And my choice to discard
I’m trapped
In the inner fight with my soul
Hard to get out
But I’ll win
Eventually I’ll bring victory
To Myself!
but sometimes I really miss the Theme "Stenght"!
It hurts,
The pain,
It aches,
Not to return again
I’m so small
In this endless big whole
A stone rolls over my tongue
Ruining all the words I stole
Stolen from a book
Putted in my mouth
To get everything I feel
On someway out
It needs to be slipped away
It needs to hold a hand
Cause every light I follow
Leads me to an uncontrolled land
Of… The inner fight
I’m out of strength, I need to rest
I need to find myself again
Need a tool to fight with
They stole my words
And my heart
They stole my senses
And my choice to discard
I’m trapped
In the inner fight with my soul
Hard to get out
But I’ll win
Eventually I’ll bring victory
To Myself!
Reacties op dit gedicht
| ~Reality~: | Donderdag, juli 15, 2004 19:27 |
| You got it!! | |
| Wicked Soul: | Donderdag, juli 15, 2004 15:05 |
| OWIE! Heerlijk gedicht Frozy! Echt heel mooi en krachtig. Keep it up. Lovely poem again. Bedankt voor je lieve reacties van de laatste tijd. :) Liefs, -Lien.- |
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| The unreachable: | Donderdag, juli 15, 2004 12:19 |
| "A stone rolls over my tongue ruining all the words I stole" =Zeer mooi geformuleerd..."I’m out of strength, I need to rest I need to find myself again"...dat is normaal..we all have that feeling once in a while...sometimes we lose ourselves...it's very important to find yourself...so if you need some time out..just take your time, because being yourself is very important in life... | |
| stairway 2 heaven: | Woensdag, juli 14, 2004 22:46 |
| heel mooi.. xx |
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| SecretMistery : | Woensdag, juli 14, 2004 21:25 |
| Mooi.... xXx en veel liefs Shar |
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| ThE/CuRe?: | Woensdag, juli 14, 2004 17:32 |
| mooi... | |
| Fading Away: | Woensdag, juli 14, 2004 17:22 |
| And so it is.. * diep onder de indruk * Liefs, |
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| Melodramatically: | Woensdag, juli 14, 2004 17:18 |
| *pakt zakdoek* *traantjes rollen* Echt keimooi geschreven! En je hebt gelijk! Die overwinning krijg je zeker! En als het even niet meer gaat, sta ik nasst je om je te motiveren ;) Veel liefs, Melodramatically |
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| Eline666: | Woensdag, juli 14, 2004 16:59 |
| WOOOW mooi meid..egt gweldii zoeper!! ikke rode traanoogjs krijg hierzoo.. love you elinuh |
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| el nifter: | Woensdag, juli 14, 2004 16:22 |
| en zo is dat!!!! go home with the cup!! | |
| ~*Woepiej*~: | Woensdag, juli 14, 2004 16:12 |
| WAAAAAAAAAUW Zit hier zo half met traandingetjes!! Mooooooooi neergezet ABOOW... o__O |
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Over dit gedicht
| Auteur: FrozenScar | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: benji | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 14 juli 2004 | ||
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