*i really miss you* (voor Joke)
singing myself lullabies, whiping my own tears
trying not to cry out loud, hoping no-one hears
a voice within keeps saying "everything's okay"
wanna face my fears and suffer, but instead i walk away
i can't handle the fact that everything has an ending
thinking i can handle it, but i could better stop pretending
comfort people and try not to cry
i look alive and kicking but inside i slowly die
allmost breaking down, but really trying not to
all my lips can mumble is "i really, really miss you"
*voor Joke, mijn chiroleidster die vorig jaar zelfmoord pleegde...te vroeg...mah, it's better to let her go and hope she'll smile, than to have to see her suffer...*
trying not to cry out loud, hoping no-one hears
a voice within keeps saying "everything's okay"
wanna face my fears and suffer, but instead i walk away
i can't handle the fact that everything has an ending
thinking i can handle it, but i could better stop pretending
comfort people and try not to cry
i look alive and kicking but inside i slowly die
allmost breaking down, but really trying not to
all my lips can mumble is "i really, really miss you"
*voor Joke, mijn chiroleidster die vorig jaar zelfmoord pleegde...te vroeg...mah, it's better to let her go and hope she'll smile, than to have to see her suffer...*
Reacties op dit gedicht
| coffeeandcyanide: | Dinsdag, november 14, 2006 00:00 |
| Ik lees net je gedicht... Doet me nog steeds huilen... ''It''s damn sad that she''s gone.'' |
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| The unreachable: | Zondag, augustus 01, 2004 22:53 |
| Ai...I'm sure she's smiling up there..wonderfull poem.. | |
| Wicked Soul: | Vrijdag, juli 30, 2004 12:05 |
| Euhm, ja :s:$ In dat soort zaken ben ik niet goed. -slikt een paar keer moeizaam- Heel herkenbaar gedicht en echt weer fantastisch geschreven. Je hebt er een mooie opvatting aan overgehouden, zie ik: "it's better to let her go and hope she'll smile, than to have to see her suffer." Heel veel sterkte sugar. Warm embrace, x, -Lien.- |
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| ThE/CuRe?: | Maandag, juli 26, 2004 18:43 |
| mooi geschreven.. heel veel sterkte en liefs!! xxxx The/Cure? |
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| nifter-a-go-go: | Maandag, juli 26, 2004 16:58 |
| mooi eerlijk... | |
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| Auteur: strawberryswirl | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: benji | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 26 juli 2004 | ||
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