+my mask of pretending
( het trekt op niveel... mjah, heb het daarstrax geschreven in alle woede en verdriet)
It's getting darker
i'm losing control
i've lost my mask of pretending
i've lost my pride at all
i hope one day you'll understand
that this pain i feel is true
please don't say: 'it's nothing...
...you'll get over it soon.'
It just doesn't work that way
what i'm feeling inside
and it's not easy to discribe
'cause there are no words in this world
to explain my sadness
and what i feel inside
that's why sometimes, i wish i could hide
(in my darkness)
It's getting darker
i'm losing control
i've lost my mask of pretending
i've lost my pride at all
i hope one day you'll understand
that this pain i feel is true
please don't say: 'it's nothing...
...you'll get over it soon.'
It just doesn't work that way
what i'm feeling inside
and it's not easy to discribe
'cause there are no words in this world
to explain my sadness
and what i feel inside
that's why sometimes, i wish i could hide
(in my darkness)
Reacties op dit gedicht
| princess_of_punk: | Maandag, september 11, 2006 18:47 |
| eeejz, zo''n mooi gedichtje,ik werd er zelf even stil van en dat gebeurt niet zo vlug,want ik ben een verschrikkelijk tettergat:p | |
| gwenje: | Woensdag, juli 28, 2004 11:13 |
| great poem, but don't hide yourself, let the world see your face and show them what you're made off... Don't give up, because the world need you :) [I mean that :)] dikke knufs gwenje |
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| P!nk Lady: | Woensdag, juli 28, 2004 10:51 |
| Eeeeej meissieee... Ik zal er altijd voor je zijn! Je kan altijd op me steunen hoor!!! Veel liefs van me en sterkz!! ~kus~ Dorien |
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| ThE/CuRe?: | Woensdag, juli 28, 2004 01:12 |
| mooi.. where silence screams words would only fail... and you know, you don't need thats mask around me.. as you told me earlier, no need to smile if you have no reason.. I can see right through it anyway ;) words are just words.. but I mean it when I say you're one of the best friends I'll ever have :) *liefs en slaapwel* xxXxx .O°Glitterfiend°O.. |
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| laura nicoli: | Woensdag, juli 28, 2004 00:57 |
| Triestig gedichtje e :( Hopelijk vind je op een dag zoveel woorden om alles te beschrijven. Heel veel Liefs Laura |
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| Auteur: [BlackMetalIstKrieg] | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: ;o)x | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 28 juli 2004 | ||
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