Will it be forever
If I lose will it be forever?
Will someone give it back to me one day
If I give up will it be forever?
Will someone not give up on me?
Yet again I refuse to say
No way, I'm going to pay again!
My whole life I've struggeld
I'm going to be just fine
With all that's left of mine..
If I do lose will it be forever?
Or just a moment away
For someone gives it back
And gives me another chance
Deep down I know you will
But something inside of me
Is saying not to believe
What looks so untrue
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Fading Away: | Donderdag, augustus 05, 2004 15:05 |
| Oh, this makes me speechless. This is really wonderful. You're so talented. You'll get another chance, when you fail. And another one, and another one.. Failing is just temporary. Don't let that fool your life.. Liefs, Heel veel sterkte, Fading Away |
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| SoLiTuDe: | Maandag, augustus 02, 2004 23:50 |
| heeel mooi geschreve!!! I believe in you and I'm sure many people believe in you!!! thnx nog voor je reactie op mijn gedicht:) veel liefs, |
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| The unreachable: | Maandag, augustus 02, 2004 22:10 |
| You always get a second chance...everyone makes mistakes..you will be ok, just believe in yourself, try to be more self-confidant, Melo..Everything will be fine..just believe.. | |
| Wicked Soul: | Vrijdag, juli 30, 2004 11:24 |
| Aanvulling van Manja: And without hope we are nothing. Erg Mooi en herkenbaar gedicht. Liefs, -Lien.- |
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| nifter-a-go-go: | Vrijdag, juli 30, 2004 08:51 |
| idd.... forever is wel erg lang. het kan altijd weer anders | |
| pluisje: | Vrijdag, juli 30, 2004 00:23 |
| volhouden.. | |
| *Just-Mel*: | Donderdag, juli 29, 2004 21:04 |
| Heel Erg Mooi Geschreven! Liefs, Mel |
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| *Poetic Justice*: | Donderdag, juli 29, 2004 20:20 |
| mooi....... Liefs Hannah |
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| Manische Manja: | Donderdag, juli 29, 2004 19:21 |
| keep the faith..even if it looks unbelievable to you..without faith a life is worthless.. nice poem! best of luck Love, Manja |
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| Paul de Graaff: | Donderdag, juli 29, 2004 19:08 |
| mooi verwoord! :) | |
Over dit gedicht
| Auteur: Melodramatically |  
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| Gecontroleerd door: christina | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 29 juli 2004 | ||
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