*fluffy superhero*
my suit's aerodynamic,
which is much better for my speed,
unlike some heroes i'm monogamic,
i stick to one girl, when she's in need
my weapons are emotions
my armor's fluffy and pink
from one to the other hide-out in sneaky motions
in places like your closet, or the sink
stylish and classy, my signature lingers
on every spot where was a rescue
for a little while, with one snap of my fingers
you're a little more me and a little less you
my strategy's not unfailing,
but with good will and X-ray vision
i might detect and solve the problems without bailing
and finally accomplish my mission
which is much better for my speed,
unlike some heroes i'm monogamic,
i stick to one girl, when she's in need
my weapons are emotions
my armor's fluffy and pink
from one to the other hide-out in sneaky motions
in places like your closet, or the sink
stylish and classy, my signature lingers
on every spot where was a rescue
for a little while, with one snap of my fingers
you're a little more me and a little less you
my strategy's not unfailing,
but with good will and X-ray vision
i might detect and solve the problems without bailing
and finally accomplish my mission
Reacties op dit gedicht
| The unreachable: | Maandag, september 13, 2004 20:36 |
| I love the fact that it's so totally you..It's your style, your poem..and that's what I like about it..Het is zo je eigen eigenzinnige stijltje waar niemand aan kan tippen..Een aarbeienmixje met een vleugje gestoorde superhero's ;-) Love it! | |
| stairway 2 heaven: | Maandag, september 06, 2004 19:54 |
| hihi ge hebt uw cool gedicht erop gezet, toppie! xxx |
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| Wicked Soul: | Maandag, augustus 30, 2004 17:52 |
| Monogaam? HEHE! :) Kom nou, kan ik je nerges toe overhalen? ;):p Echt niet, my cute superheroin? -grijnst breed- I bet you'll make it. Je hebt in elk geval weer een subliem zalig gedicht geschreven. :) Liefs, -Lien.- |
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| Oorlam: | Maandag, augustus 30, 2004 16:25 |
| :-) nice superhero | |
| Dead Angel: | Maandag, augustus 30, 2004 14:10 |
| Ge zult u doel wel bereike.. mr, alleen gaat het ni lukke.. Love your poem.. but love you more;-)! XxX | |
| Marten: | Maandag, augustus 30, 2004 13:32 |
| fluffie to the rescue? | |
| de nifter: | Maandag, augustus 30, 2004 10:22 |
| tsss.... too bad you're no match for the evil dr von nifterstein... insert insane evil laughter here | |
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| Auteur: strawberryswirl | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: christina | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 30 augustus 2004 | ||
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