Blend me a perfect day
Paint me ink
Blend me love
with life
let me drink
it
with a smile
drowning every sort of strife
mess up my hair
paint my face in
the colours that we share
unchain my soul it's melody
take me down this way
where I can really see
your heart
opening up to me
two hearts tuned in
soulfull medley
blending in
looking out
always wondering
never doubt
the fact
that me and you are one
*oh and by the way... did I ever tell you that I love you more than life...?*
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Winter Pagan: | Zaterdag, oktober 30, 2004 01:36 |
| this is the most perfect poem i've ever read. A whole other hippy world surrounds these words as I read it... Or that might just be me, though... I really want to thank you for all the things you said about my poems, 'happy landings'is the best thing anyone has ever wished for me to have *i am no worthy* -Brian |
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| Fading Away: | Zaterdag, oktober 23, 2004 14:41 |
| Sometimes you'd wish to believe your own words, WOULDN'T you? (pardon my mistake) | |
| Fading Away: | Zaterdag, oktober 23, 2004 14:40 |
| Outstanding.. -sighs- Sometimes you'd wish to believe your own words, don't you? (I do) Keep up the good work, |
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| Cosmates : | Dinsdag, oktober 19, 2004 22:47 |
| Ik hou van fictie :) mooi! | |
| BloodElf: | Dinsdag, oktober 19, 2004 12:27 |
| You should almost get wings ;) |
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| de nifter: | Dinsdag, oktober 19, 2004 08:02 |
| hmmmm.... alles ff voor je in de blendert gemieterd maar t is nogal een zootje geworden.... nouja.... je moet het er maar mee doen... oh ja.... mocht je 2 vingers tegenkomen.... DIE WIL IK TERUG!!!! | |
| Tim Mooij: | Maandag, oktober 18, 2004 23:41 |
| man, I hate the fact that it's fiction :) afijn, nevermind... |
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| Auteur: Cypher-punks | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Firebolt | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 18 oktober 2004 | ||
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