As I hold on so tightly
Your words
Appear as dots in my mind
Crusading all the leftovers
You left behind
I tumble, sinking in a bunch
Notice a quick sheer paper-crunch
As I sit here, quoting your lies
And I again, throw my lonely dice
When I wonder
I see myself going under
A last attempt to breath
As I hold on so tightly
Welcoming my grief
You catch
The tears falling from my eye
Invading all my reasons
Why not to cry
I ascend, rising in a wink
Pouring myself another drink
As I suffer, my floating sorrows
I feel this hurt again, and it shows
When I wonder
I shoot up at pale-light thunder
A final grasp for reach
As I hold on so tightly
Approving your siege
You sound
Like sticky glue in my head
Cremating all my feelings
The pain I shed
You’ll destroy the essence of my core
Even if I say, ‘No more!’
You would be delighted to be misled
But I will say, ‘Please, not yet!’
Appear as dots in my mind
Crusading all the leftovers
You left behind
I tumble, sinking in a bunch
Notice a quick sheer paper-crunch
As I sit here, quoting your lies
And I again, throw my lonely dice
When I wonder
I see myself going under
A last attempt to breath
As I hold on so tightly
Welcoming my grief
You catch
The tears falling from my eye
Invading all my reasons
Why not to cry
I ascend, rising in a wink
Pouring myself another drink
As I suffer, my floating sorrows
I feel this hurt again, and it shows
When I wonder
I shoot up at pale-light thunder
A final grasp for reach
As I hold on so tightly
Approving your siege
You sound
Like sticky glue in my head
Cremating all my feelings
The pain I shed
You’ll destroy the essence of my core
Even if I say, ‘No more!’
You would be delighted to be misled
But I will say, ‘Please, not yet!’
Reacties op dit gedicht
| PeterdB: | Zondag, oktober 31, 2004 23:20 |
| Very nice! | |
| Raira: | Zondag, oktober 31, 2004 17:45 |
| au au...de woorden spreken tot rakende gevoelens... het is en blijft iedere keer weer indruk maken hoe je gevoelens op papier zet geweldig gedaan liefs raira |
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| Fri..: | Zondag, oktober 31, 2004 17:23 |
| (Y) and again and again, Geweldig gedaan.. ( ik weet het , ik word saai:P maar dan moet jij niet van die super mooie gedichten blijven schrijven hoor:) nouja, doe egigenlijk maar wel.. ik hou me wel aan de titel saaie reacties geverd:P) hihi Nouja, Liefs en een kusje ( op je wang heh;) hihi :)) Fri |
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| Tim Mooij: | Zondag, oktober 31, 2004 17:09 |
| heey, cool diggie :) veel gevoel, verwoordt in mooie metaforen, (Y) let niet op me spelling, ben niet zo goed in nederlands :P doeg T |
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| Teared Out: | Zondag, oktober 31, 2004 14:13 |
| Another one, who can really paint his feelings on the paper.. =) Echt mooi gedaan! Liefs. |
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| Lia : | Zondag, oktober 31, 2004 13:24 |
| vele prachtige zinnen waarin pijn en gevoel verweven zitten... | |
| BloodElf: | Zondag, oktober 31, 2004 12:52 |
| "As a wood of paper, made as a ship. To crawl over the oceans of your mindfeeding Pain" Prachtig gedicht! |
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| Auteur: Godvader | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Sheena | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 31 oktober 2004 | ||
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