Moodswing Whiskey
*an impression of a dream*
Situated on
snowy streets of Canterbury
right out of a Dickens novel
I seem to be following
a trail of roses
Down to a darkened bar
local backalley hide-away
full of candlelighted smoke
and guitars on the ceiling
it's warm as I enter
Jeff is singing at the back
his Hallelujah (although he covered it)
rides on the clouds of sweet tobacco through mid-air
the whiskey makes me feel warm
and even more at home
as liquid ambassador
of joy yet to expect
Corpus Christi Carol with
a piano sends shivers down the back of my neck
as I look at the ice in my glass
...which I didn't ask for...
too tired to sleep
I find myself
listening to everything
on the tune of Lilac Wine
She enters within a cloud of roses
I couldn't move even if I could
but thats probably because of all the empty glasses before me
(there aren't half so much as I think, because I'm seeing everything double. So I guess I think I'm not drunk...)
she exits again after a while,
I smile
one more happy memory stored inside my heart
*end of scene*
fade in: Last goodbye
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Tershi: | Dinsdag, november 02, 2004 19:16 |
| goed, weer :) echt heel goed.. she exits again after a while, I smile one more happy memory stored inside my heart *to bad it's just fictie* |
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| de nifter: | Dinsdag, november 02, 2004 07:59 |
| (jeff buckley?) please tell me bartender what can you do but cry tears for your water and pour whiskey in your shoes... (damn man... ben echt ontzettend druk en dat blokkeert de inspiratie-flow een beetje... ik heb gewoon ff niks :( hoewel er weer een paar ideetjes voorzichtig hun kopjes laten zien... patience... anyway, dank voor het stimuleren. leuk om te horen...) grrrrrroetas |
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| life~in~every~breath~: | Maandag, november 01, 2004 15:32 |
| -smile-... geweldig...! |
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| Fading Away: | Maandag, november 01, 2004 14:05 |
| "(there aren't half so much as I think, because I'm seeing everything double. So I guess I think I'm not drunk...)" Brilliant..! Well done, Tim. |
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| Gepubliceerd op: 01 november 2004 | ||
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