^Destroyed city^
You looked back,
for the last time.
There was nothing left,
only a destroyed city,
and a crying me.
The lights were out,
the people died,
the love was gone,
I was the only left.
You looked back,
for the last time.
You asked me if I needed help,
but I said I didn't.
At first I made you happy,
then I made you cry.
At first I asked you,
to come closer,
and then I asked you to leave,
and you did.
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Augustijntje: | Zondag, september 11, 2005 11:31 |
| ja, vind deze hierboven ook mooier. goed gedaan! x! |
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| FireFly: | Zaterdag, september 10, 2005 22:54 |
| Vind die versie hierboven 't mooist (: Echt mooi geschreven weer.. You know how I think about de inhoud dusja :^) Love (: |
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| Flo0rtjuh: | Zaterdag, september 10, 2005 20:08 |
| aargh was de originele versie kwijt, en die vind k net, dus hier komt ie; Destroyed city You looked back, for the last time. There was nothing left, only a destroyed city, and a broken me. A destroyed city, where has been love. Everything we had, was gone. Where my smile has been, were only tears left. Where I made you happy first, I made you cry. At first I asked you, to come closer to me. And then I |
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| Auteur: Flo0rtjuh | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: michris | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 10 september 2005 | ||
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