what would you do?
what would you do
if I give you my wings?
would you take them?
and fly away?
would you left everything behind?
the persons who love you?
the things you like?
I think you would
so I don't say I've got them
because I love you so much!
I won't let you go!
I won't hurt myself!
because when I say I've got them
you'll take them..
and then you'll fly away
and then..
I've lost you!
if I give you my wings?
would you take them?
and fly away?
would you left everything behind?
the persons who love you?
the things you like?
I think you would
so I don't say I've got them
because I love you so much!
I won't let you go!
I won't hurt myself!
because when I say I've got them
you'll take them..
and then you'll fly away
and then..
I've lost you!
Reacties op dit gedicht
| just_mee: | Vrijdag, november 04, 2005 22:04 |
| Apart maar heel mooi! Goed geschreven :) Kus, just mee |
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| ..::Deezz::..: | Woensdag, september 14, 2005 20:22 |
| het is in ieder geval wel erg mooi geschreven, en we kunnen eruit maken wat je het over hebt;) Dikke kus en knuffel hvj Desi |
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| FireFly: | Woensdag, september 14, 2005 18:28 |
| Heb maar een paar grammatica foutjes kunnen ontdekken en die heb ik meestal zelf ook, dus vind dat er niks mis is met je Engels ;) Liefs |
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| ^butterfly: | Woensdag, september 14, 2005 17:57 |
| kweet niet of mn engels super is gegaan maarja.. sry daarvoor.. | |
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| Auteur: ^butterfly | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: benji | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 14 september 2005 | ||
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