Another year.
Another year.
Another year, has come to an end,
for you and me, without comment.
We can not turn, time back again,
undo the wounds, which did not mend.
So what is still, for us to keep,
the year to come, which sounds so sweet.
A new begin, to all of us,
continue the way of life, with train, boat or bus.
Sisters, brothers, friends and lover,
take this chance, to help each other.
To start the way, of this new year,
with hope and faith, love and cheer.
Celebrate each coming day, for the things,
which will come, our way.
Shout together, to the power above,
thank you for each day we live, dance. . .
and love.
Happy new year to you all.
Another year, has come to an end,
for you and me, without comment.
We can not turn, time back again,
undo the wounds, which did not mend.
So what is still, for us to keep,
the year to come, which sounds so sweet.
A new begin, to all of us,
continue the way of life, with train, boat or bus.
Sisters, brothers, friends and lover,
take this chance, to help each other.
To start the way, of this new year,
with hope and faith, love and cheer.
Celebrate each coming day, for the things,
which will come, our way.
Shout together, to the power above,
thank you for each day we live, dance. . .
and love.
Happy new year to you all.
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Gert: | Vrijdag, december 30, 2005 17:24 |
| Happy new year to you too. Groet, Gert |
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| toepta: | Vrijdag, december 30, 2005 16:34 |
| Ik krijg er lekker warm van! prachtig geschreven! |
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| Zilke: | Vrijdag, december 30, 2005 10:21 |
| Thanks, and indeed same to you too. Tis een goed gedicht, maar je kan een hele hoop komma's weglaten. Ik vermoed dat die er staan om het juiste metrum aan te geven, maar dat is eigenlijk niet nodig (onderschat je lezers niet ;) ) want dat wijst zichzelf zo al mooi uit (zeker in de 1ste strofe). Is maar een bedenking uiteraard. :) |
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| Reiger: | Vrijdag, december 30, 2005 08:22 |
| Same to you! | |
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| Auteur: Dylirium | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: maneschijn | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 30 december 2005 | ||
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