The tree.
Once upon there was a seed,
which started to grow, from very deep.
Searching its way through the ground,
to become a tree tall and proud.
For years it stood so big and strong,
his leafs in the sky, to be seen by all.
The places name I can not recall,
within my dream the most beautiful of them all.
Like in a story which was told by many,
one jealous creature was filled with envy.
It started to search for that tall tree,
to share its glory and become as big as he.
When he found that big tall tree,
the creature yelled filled with proud for all to see.
It could not wait to go and show,
all the others what he had found, where it did grow.
So in all his dreaming of fame and pride,
a cold hard sound filled the sky.
The creature felt tears in his eyes,
he had chopped down the tree
| dishesqueen: | Zaterdag, maart 25, 2006 11:40 |
| wow,this is one of your best poems I think! Amazingly well-written and the background is the best finishing touch! Keep up the good work! | |
| Augustijntje: | Dinsdag, maart 21, 2006 12:16 |
| uhum..nice words from a nice GIRL!! :o) | |
| Gert: | Dinsdag, maart 21, 2006 11:32 |
| Sterk krachtig gedicht, en erg mooi. x Gert |
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| MizzTeaQ: | Dinsdag, maart 21, 2006 10:06 |
| I like this one... It let''s your mind imagine things... Very nicely and creatively done! A hug , |
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| Augustijntje: | Maandag, maart 20, 2006 17:53 |
| amazingly written again.. nice comparison to life itself x! |
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| Auteur: Dylirium | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: maneschijn | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 20 maart 2006 | ||
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