Without you
So many reasons I do love you,
Some too hard to explain,
This feeling- undescribable..
without you.. Only pain.
The way my knees do tremble,
how i look as you pass by..
I could say it plain and simple
Without you, i would cry.
I need not elaborate,
Or continue to speak,
Listen when i say this,
Without you.. I feel bleak!
All of you is so perfect!
From the bottom to the top
Please, be mine forever..
Cause withou you.. My life would stop!
Reacties op dit gedicht
| lonely 1: | Zaterdag, september 16, 2006 16:33 |
| heel mooi gedaan! liefs, lonely 1 |
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| PoemGirl14: | Zaterdag, september 16, 2006 16:30 |
| Dit is echt een goed gedicht! De opbouw is naar mijn mening perfect, en je woordkeuze ook. Erg mooi. | |
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| Auteur: Jessiiee | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: christina | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 16 september 2006 | ||
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