so intense..
Life can be pretty hard sometimes
but then there’s that one thing in our lives
that makes up for all the difficulties
that helps us through the strives
You know, that one thing that feels so right
that amazing feeling of security
in my case that was you
you were the only certainty
I can’t help but feeling terribly lost
now that I have lost the one thing that made sense
and I’ve always known you ment so much to me
but I never thought the pain would be this intense
but then there’s that one thing in our lives
that makes up for all the difficulties
that helps us through the strives
You know, that one thing that feels so right
that amazing feeling of security
in my case that was you
you were the only certainty
I can’t help but feeling terribly lost
now that I have lost the one thing that made sense
and I’ve always known you ment so much to me
but I never thought the pain would be this intense
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Marsie: | Dinsdag, december 05, 2006 14:24 |
| Beautifully written and so recognisable! A big hug for you... |
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| your illusion: | Maandag, november 13, 2006 19:48 |
| swel heel mooi!! kiekevel moment azo!! pff doe mij eigenlijk wel aan iets nii zo goe denke ma allee!! Dikke Kus X |
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| M@rcel: | Zaterdag, november 11, 2006 23:51 |
| prachtig geschreven heel,heel mooi Liefs M@rcel |
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| --justme--: | Zaterdag, november 11, 2006 16:48 |
| Supermooi geschreven! heel herkenbaar helaas. warme knuffel! |
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| Bramboterham: | Donderdag, november 09, 2006 22:13 |
| Hi, thanks for your comment on my poëm, I''m not really planning to kill myself, so don''t worry, I just want to show a vision from a totally different (made-up) person. I really like this poëm, because of the interesting subject and the special rhyme. | |
| dishesqueen: | Donderdag, november 09, 2006 19:06 |
| such an intense poem it is...I recognise every word of what you describe here...Well done! | |
| __xMegan: | Woensdag, november 08, 2006 22:09 |
| ahh we both found new inspiration I see but I like yours better <3 I can feel the intensity, beautifully written, once again ××× |
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| Tim R.: | Woensdag, november 08, 2006 20:36 |
| 10/10 ! ! ! ! ! ! You rule ! xxxxxxxxx | |
| Peerke_x: | Woensdag, november 08, 2006 19:57 |
| Wouw.. this is beautiful, I like your style of writing! thanks for all your reactions on my poems..! Kiss&Hug |
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| Auteur: Augustijntje | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: benji | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 08 november 2006 | ||
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