I knew
You never know.
You see not my distress.
You know that it always well good sat.
But psychic am I died.
I sit al more then four years in the gutter.
I hoped that you there for my would are.
I hoped that you my distress saw.
I would that you knew that it not good with me was.
Now am I psychic died.
And now am I with me fools deep and far in the gutter...
(k ben niet goed in engels... het spijt me daarvoor...)
You see not my distress.
You know that it always well good sat.
But psychic am I died.
I sit al more then four years in the gutter.
I hoped that you there for my would are.
I hoped that you my distress saw.
I would that you knew that it not good with me was.
Now am I psychic died.
And now am I with me fools deep and far in the gutter...
(k ben niet goed in engels... het spijt me daarvoor...)
Reacties op dit gedicht
| jeweltjuh: | Woensdag, december 27, 2006 20:11 |
| oke..als je volgende keer weer een engels gedicht maakt stuur hem dan eerst naar mij haal ik de spelfouten eruit nee hoor grapje meis:P Wel leuk dat je het in het engels deed:P |
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| Kelly Louise: | Woensdag, december 27, 2006 13:49 |
| Hee, ik heb een paar verbeteringen gemaakt in je gedicht. Het klopte niet altijd maar het is wel een mooi gedicht! Goedzo :) You never know You do not see my distress You know that it was always right But mentally I am dead I am already sitting more than four years in the gutter I hoped that you would''ve been there I hoped you saw my distress I wished that you knew that I wasn''t doing well Now I am mentally dead And now I am deep and far in th |
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| Gepubliceerd op: 25 december 2006 | ||
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