Broken heart, tormented soul
Her heart bleeds
when the boy left she desperately needs,
staring at the bubbling water of the cold river,
she started to cry and shiver.
Her heart is broken, her tormented soul taken away
the boy she loved didn’t want to stay,
he was her first boy-friend ever,
for him this relationship wasn’t meant to last forever.
She sacrificed everything to please her boy-friend,
she never thought this relationship would have come to an end,
the love came from one side,
the concern to lose his sperm was the only thing on his mind.
Why was she so blind?
The damage is done
when the one you loved is gone,
There is no hope, there is no relief,
there is only sadness and grief.
She didn’t know what to do,
she wished this wasn’t true
but now she had to realize
that she stepped in his trap with open eyes.
Her last footsteps were covered by the ice-cold snow
when she was taken by the swirling river-flow
and when the angels of death came
he knew he was the one to blame.
The damage is done
when the one you loved is gone,
There is no hope, there is no relief,
there is only sadness and grief.
when the boy left she desperately needs,
staring at the bubbling water of the cold river,
she started to cry and shiver.
Her heart is broken, her tormented soul taken away
the boy she loved didn’t want to stay,
he was her first boy-friend ever,
for him this relationship wasn’t meant to last forever.
She sacrificed everything to please her boy-friend,
she never thought this relationship would have come to an end,
the love came from one side,
the concern to lose his sperm was the only thing on his mind.
Why was she so blind?
The damage is done
when the one you loved is gone,
There is no hope, there is no relief,
there is only sadness and grief.
She didn’t know what to do,
she wished this wasn’t true
but now she had to realize
that she stepped in his trap with open eyes.
Her last footsteps were covered by the ice-cold snow
when she was taken by the swirling river-flow
and when the angels of death came
he knew he was the one to blame.
The damage is done
when the one you loved is gone,
There is no hope, there is no relief,
there is only sadness and grief.
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Br0kEn: | Vrijdag, juni 15, 2007 20:14 |
| weer zo''n prachtig gedicht!! Sommige delen doen me denken aan mezelf maar ikz ou het nooit zo goed kunnen verwoorden Blijf schrijven je bent echt goed groetjes |
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| lonely 1: | Dinsdag, juni 05, 2007 16:02 |
| ondanks het droeve verhaal, zo mooi om te lezen, liefs lonely 1 dank je voor je reactie, en ja hoor, ik zie ook nog het mooie rondom mij :) |
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| yellow: | Dinsdag, juni 05, 2007 14:39 |
| Ook al is het fictie, mocht hij (de fictieve verlater)zoiets te weten komen van zijn ex-vriendinnetje, zou het hem nog koud laten. Zo zit de wereld in mekaar en niet anders. groetjes, Y. |
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| Windwhisper: | Dinsdag, juni 05, 2007 05:29 |
| Pot jan dorie...de tranen lopen over mijn gezicht, Liefs Cobie Goede morgen Kuzzzzz |
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Over dit gedicht
| Auteur: MG Poetry | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: christina | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 05 juni 2007 | ||
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