flame taken by you sigh
even though
she looked in his eyes
never could he see
through the darkest hour
the moment of truth
enhanced by the knowledge
for Thee to let go
the desperation to seek
the wellness of the heart
the power to the growth
of the tremendous sea
to thou I tell you
never to look for a solution
a method to help
‘cause thou never
understood the question
the light you were holding
in your hand
the falling tear
the flame taken by
your sigh
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| Mrs Flintstone: | Vrijdag, augustus 10, 2007 23:12 |
| Really good writing. The only comment I have is to rather use "For" or otherwise "because" instead of "''cause", because that will fit much better with thee and thou. "''cause" is slang language. Regards, Wilma |
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| Auteur: Angel13 | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: christina | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 10 augustus 2007 | ||
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