world ruled by dead
Living in a world ruled by the dead.
hurt an tears filled with sorrow,
trying to understand and not to forget,
but the feelings I feel are so hollow,
people pas me by every day,
never looking me in the eye,
just walking there own selfish way,
but never shall they ask why,
always alone in this cold life i live,
just like living in a small dark room,
enjoying my time and trying to give,
but yet I always feel the coming doom,
words like an escape from madness,
reading the things I write,
poems to clear away my sadness,
everyone has a bad day right?
hurt an tears filled with sorrow,
trying to understand and not to forget,
but the feelings I feel are so hollow,
people pas me by every day,
never looking me in the eye,
just walking there own selfish way,
but never shall they ask why,
always alone in this cold life i live,
just like living in a small dark room,
enjoying my time and trying to give,
but yet I always feel the coming doom,
words like an escape from madness,
reading the things I write,
poems to clear away my sadness,
everyone has a bad day right?
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Free@Bird: | Zaterdag, september 08, 2007 09:14 |
| Mooi gedicht Lily! liefs, kerima |
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| honingbijtje: | Vrijdag, september 07, 2007 14:55 |
| absolutely right. liefs honingbijtje |
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| lexx: | Vrijdag, september 07, 2007 11:59 |
| :D | |
| kerima ellouise: | Vrijdag, september 07, 2007 11:47 |
| mooi geschreven Lily... open the windows of that dark room and let your tears dry by the sun...I will wink at you... liefs kerima ellouise |
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| Pancho v/d Post : | Vrijdag, september 07, 2007 10:28 |
| mooi gedicht!!! p.s. bedankt dat mijn gedichten je helpen bij het verwerken van bepaalde momenten in je leven. groetjes Pancho ;) |
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| Mrs Flintstone: | Vrijdag, september 07, 2007 09:52 |
| Hey Lily, Mooi geschreven! Ik heb je gemist, joh. Tijdje niets van je gehoord. En ik zag geen gedichten van je. Bedankt voor jr reactie. Liefs van Wilma |
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| H.J.: | Vrijdag, september 07, 2007 09:50 |
| people pas me by every day, never looking me in the eye, zo voel ik het altijd als ik noodgedwongen eens in een grote stad moet zijn. prachtig dicht. liefs H.J. |
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| lexx: | Vrijdag, september 07, 2007 08:59 |
| Right! :) | |
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| Auteur: Lily May Parker | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Sunflower | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 07 september 2007 | ||
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