Mirror

I was looking in the mirror
asking who I was

The awnser?
...

And then I noticed something
my reflection wasn't the same
The me I was looking at now
Smiled: let's play a game

I said: who are you?
Me smiled: who are you?
I asked you something
I asked you something too

I asked where he's from
I lifted my knee
no matter what I did
he kept immitating me

But it couldn't be me
There was something with his eyes
I could see right through them
to a soul that cries

Me couldn't hide it
he didn't even try
He just kept smiling
While I saw his soul die

I was there for 2 minutes
But it felt like an hour
Overrunned by emotions
I wanted to break the mirror

I stopped before I struck him
Cause I finally started to see
I realised what the message was
and me turned back to me

Geschreven door

E.Semedo

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Sad_angel:	Zaterdag, september 29, 2007 17:29
EGT PRACHTIG... Doet me een beetje denken aan mijn gedichtje spiegelbeeld,, maar hij is lang niet z0 g0ed als die van j0uw,, prachtig Sad_angel (a) Sad_angel

Augustijntje:	Vrijdag, september 28, 2007 19:05
I could see right through them to a soul that cries While I saw his soul die amazing! beautifully written x!

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Auteur: E.Semedo
Gecontroleerd door: christina
Gepubliceerd op: 28 september 2007
Thema's: [IK] [Verwarring]